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Makeup Artist

Andrew James Makeup

Posts: 335

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

I only want constructive i know a lot of people just like to go thats crap thats bad should have done this and that 

Anyway i did this at a recent shoot i posted another image from the same shoot but i think this one is better big_smile

http://i50.tinypic.com/f38h3b.jpg

Nov 11 12 06:39 am Link

Photographer

Good Egg Productions

Posts: 15986

Orlando, Florida, US

It appears that there is makeup on this model.  It appears to have been applied well.

I believe that the lip color is in a different color family as the eye color, but that may have been what was asked for.


This is not a good makeup photo.

Nov 11 12 06:47 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32438

Poulsbo, Washington, US

You want constructive criticism but you're complaining about people saying how to do the shot differently?

"That's crap" is definitely negative, but suggesting better ways to do the shot sounds like the epitome of constructive criticism. Even pointing out what's isn't working is constructive.

Nov 11 12 06:49 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32438

Poulsbo, Washington, US

This shot *is* better than the shot in the other thread. It's better lighted. The color balance is more under control and the skin tones are much more pleasing.

Nov 11 12 06:53 am Link

Photographer

Monday Morning

Posts: 338

Norman, Oklahoma, US

The makeup looks like it is well done but the retouchers heavy handed smoothing takes away from your work.

Nov 11 12 06:58 am Link

Photographer

SSR Designs

Posts: 471

Bartlesville, Oklahoma, US

Overall I like the makeup...its simple and to the point.  But the one thing that sticks out to me is the color of the lips and the color of the hair...it really doesn't blend well.

Nov 11 12 07:06 am Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2034

Chicago, Illinois, US

Monday Morning wrote:
The makeup looks like it is well done but the retouchers heavy handed smoothing takes away from your work.

+1

Nov 11 12 07:06 am Link