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Model

Amanda J Foster

Posts: 729

New York, New York, US

I have a new photo to add, and I really don't know which one to delete. Help?

Nov 11 12 09:42 pm Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

how many natural unedited shots do you need....

ditch
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/21/501a046918aab_m.jpg

its blown out, blurry, with wronkled sheets, and you have plenty of headshots.

Nov 11 12 10:29 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8831

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/21/501a04779b9bc_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121111/21/50a08bd25dc23_m.jpg
These would not be missed

Nov 12 12 04:27 am Link

Photographer

SKITA Studios

Posts: 1566

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Frowny:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg
Odd angle:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/50207379e469c_m.jpg

Nov 12 12 03:03 pm Link

Photographer

M Pandolfo Photography

Posts: 12116

Tampa, Florida, US

It says you have 15 images in your portfolio but none were showing up for me...even when expanded or viewing all. I have to assume that's an MM thing.

Nov 12 12 03:13 pm Link

Photographer

dgold

Posts: 10273

North Smithfield, Rhode Island, US

I suggest to ditch this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg

Nov 12 12 03:13 pm Link

Photographer

M Pandolfo Photography

Posts: 12116

Tampa, Florida, US

SKITA Studios wrote:
Odd angle:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/50207379e469c_m.jpg

I agree with this one. Not a flattering angle and makes it look like you're slouching and the open mouth expression isn't your best. (OMG, I've turned into my mother...I just said slouching.)

You have a great look btw but a similar scowl in all the images I've seen...and another slouch image with open mouth (the two images montaged).

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121111/21/50a08bd25dc23_m.jpg

Nov 12 12 03:14 pm Link

Model

Amanda J Foster

Posts: 729

New York, New York, US

thanks you guys!

Nov 13 12 05:10 pm Link

Model

Brightonn

Posts: 234

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30605699

I think diptics in general are weak unless its a true editorial.  I also think a few more color might be strong as your color beauty shot really stands out!

Nov 14 12 08:09 am Link