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Photographer

DLINE Photography

Posts: 23

Memphis, Tennessee, US

All comments welcome..... Please critique!!!!!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/19/50a3123d0ea73_m.jpg

Nov 14 12 03:38 pm Link

Photographer

FLORENCE PHOTO STUDIO

Posts: 89

Florence, Oregon, US

Beautiful image, great lines & lighting, Congrats to you both.  smile
   Dave

Nov 14 12 03:47 pm Link

Photographer

DLINE Photography

Posts: 23

Memphis, Tennessee, US

FLASHBACK PHOTO wrote:
Beautiful image, great lines & lighting, Congrats to you both.  smile
   Dave

Thank you Dave!!

Nov 14 12 03:49 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

Beautiful work. For avatar duty it's a bit dark in the lower-left corner, but in full scale it's a wonderful image. (BUT it's still a fabulous avatar.)

Nov 14 12 04:02 pm Link

Model

Brightonn

Posts: 234

New Orleans, Louisiana, US

I think the basic geometry of the figure, the pyramid, is really powerful.  Fairly informative of your style and quality of work.

Nov 14 12 04:03 pm Link

Photographer

DLINE Photography

Posts: 23

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Thank you all for you comments.....

Nov 14 12 04:14 pm Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

Nice image, but as an avatar? Nope...

In thumbnail size, it's too dark to tell what's going on in the lower left quadrant.

Remember, some folks are using small monitors and are well past their 20-20 vision days...

Just my opinion

Nov 14 12 08:22 pm Link

Photographer

SYCF

Posts: 276

Los Angeles, California, US

I would crop it so it feels symmetrical. The pose is already trying to do that, the off centered to the left crop feels off.

Nov 14 12 10:58 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8820

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

The pyramid form works well, the space in front of the model feels right, only down side is the light gradient where the bottom is darker.

Nov 15 12 05:10 am Link

Photographer

DLINE Photography

Posts: 23

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Thanks to all!!!

Nov 15 12 06:29 am Link