Forums > Critique > Which pictures should go?

Model

Sterling Clairmont

Posts: 29

Los Angeles, California, US

Trying to build a strong portfolio on here, just wondering which of my pictures should go?

Nov 18 12 04:16 pm Link

Photographer

A N D E R S O N

Posts: 2553

Rockville, Maryland, US

I don't think anything is really hurting your portfolio, though I'm not a huge fan of the vampire thing...

I would love to work with you!

Nov 18 12 04:54 pm Link

Photographer

Matt Forma

Posts: 373

Denver, Colorado, US

I would consider losing the second and third shots. They are not particularly of high quality as far as beauty shots go. The second shot especially is not flattering at all.  Just my opinion. Best of luck to you!

Nov 18 12 06:44 pm Link

Photographer

photog in boxes

Posts: 83

Glendale, California, US

All your shot are good, but I'd lose something from the top row...three shots straight that are bare shoulder beauties...they're all nice, but too simi
lar.

Nov 18 12 07:06 pm Link

Photographer

Shirley Zhong

Posts: 2156

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Nov 18 12 08:13 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Woodinville, Washington, US

You seem to have cleaned out several images already, but I'd suggest losing this one, too.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/18/50a303b5b3ad7_m.jpg

It's visually weaker than the other remaining images. It's a poor use of ambient light.

Nov 19 12 02:07 am Link