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Model

Eric Occhipinti

Posts: 2

San Diego, California, US

I would be ever so greatful for a handful of MMers to give me a portfolio analysis.

Much love, 

  - Eric Occhipinti

Nov 26 12 02:09 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8820

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/04/5066dace84e6c_m.jpg

With out the wrinkled forehead this would be your strongest image

Nov 26 12 06:32 am Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 27189

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I am no expert but

I would say you have a good look - strong and rugged

It would appear that you are working with the right calibre of photographers ( even the cel phone shot isnt bad ...lol )

As you list Fashion as one of your goals I would suggest more clothed shots - business suit, sports wear etc

and more head shots

Nov 26 12 06:34 am Link