Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia
Nov 27 12 06:38 am Link
Portland, Maine, US
I like this... especially what you've done to the hair. Looks much better than original.
I will say, personal preference:
I would have removed or at least softened the wrinkle lines in the neck from where it is twisted. I can also still see dark marks from where you took out some of the other lines.
Even out the tones on her back and used a little liquify to make the curve nice and smooth.
Remove what I'm guessing is her hand from next to her arm. It's not necessary and I think it's overall distracting from the entire photo.
Nov 27 12 09:04 am Link
Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria
I like what you've done.. if we're taking only the "after" in mind. However, I don't think it was supposed to be such a dramatic image - the make up is too dark and the hair is a bit of an overkill for me.
Dec 16 12 01:40 am Link
Baia Mare, Maramureş, Romania
I like the new hair! That part looks great
I don't like the twisty thing around her neck on your edit though, I find it too distracting.
And as a personal preference, I would have straightened her spine a bit with liquify.
Dec 18 12 11:08 am Link
London, England, United Kingdom
hair is great and the flying ribbon...I think values are a bit dark for me..maybe midtones a bit lighter....I would also remove whatever is sticking out in the chest area....I still like the original tones though they might be a little bit altered...Would like to see revision
Dec 19 12 04:57 pm Link
Paris, Île-de-France, France
Sofia Zasheva wrote:
Dec 24 12 12:47 am Link
Columbus, Ohio, US
I think what you did to the hair sounds like a good idea in theory, but I don't necessarily think it looks natural enough.
Also, I would have softened or removed most of the wrinkles on the neck. I'm a bit sad you removed the freckles on her shoulder (I'm a big fan of freckles on models right now).
I agree with others that the black ribbon is a bit distracting. I would have removed the entirety of it in all honesty (maybe even the part around her neck too).
Dec 25 12 06:41 pm Link
Oyster Bay, New York, US
Oleg Kosach wrote:
I don't have one of those.
Dec 25 12 06:49 pm Link