Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > New Shots, Comments Critique? will return

Photographer

MacLeod Designs

Posts: 3309

Mooresville, North Carolina, US

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/10 … l#/A151704

thats the link to my new photos, let me know what you think and i will critique your avatar

Dec 02 12 09:29 am Link

Photographer

MacLeod Designs

Posts: 3309

Mooresville, North Carolina, US

anyone?

Dec 02 12 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

EAS PHOTOGRAPHY

Posts: 116

Boston, Massachusetts, US

I really like your use of lighting! well done

Dec 02 12 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

OmnyRa

Posts: 1029

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Maybe if I knew what they were intended for....
They're kind of clinical in appearance as far as the posing and action.  The first question that came to mind was, "Sports medicine?" Lighting is great, but the action seems a little stiff to me.

Dec 04 12 12:51 pm Link

Photographer

Nightlites Photography

Posts: 17

Covina, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/09/50bb8dbacd5bc_m.jpg

Great Lighting, great job overall.

Dec 04 12 09:09 pm Link

Photographer

MacLeod Designs

Posts: 3309

Mooresville, North Carolina, US

EAS PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
I really like your use of lighting! well done

i really like your profile photo as a large size, as an avatar, the shadow is a bit overcoming

Dec 05 12 04:14 pm Link

Photographer

MacLeod Designs

Posts: 3309

Mooresville, North Carolina, US

OmnyRa wrote:
Maybe if I knew what they were intended for....
They're kind of clinical in appearance as far as the posing and action.  The first question that came to mind was, "Sports medicine?" Lighting is great, but the action seems a little stiff to me.

i like the nice clean lighting on your model in your avatar, but the overwhelming hot spot on the chair beside her is very distracting

Dec 05 12 04:15 pm Link

Photographer

MacLeod Designs

Posts: 3309

Mooresville, North Carolina, US

Nightlites Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/09/50bb8dbacd5bc_m.jpg

Great Lighting, great job overall.

thanks

your avatar comes across very contrasty, if thats what you are going for great, its not my personal style but i know many peoplle like it

Dec 05 12 04:16 pm Link

Photographer

Guss W

Posts: 10634

Clearwater, Florida, US

It looks like you've got the strobist style down pretty good, but it just looks like a lighting exercise.  They need something more - Maybe more expression, maybe more background, maybe some grunge effects in Photoshop.

Dec 08 12 03:08 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4501

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Nightlites Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/09/50bb8dbacd5bc_m.jpg

Great Lighting, great job overall.

Agree with this - the lighting and overall look is very clean and polished.

I like the black and white conversions - great contrast while retaining strong detail.

Dec 08 12 09:50 pm Link

Photographer

Danbwr photos

Posts: 109

Wilmington, North Carolina, US

I like the idea of this one, but something about the positioning makes it look like she has wheels for legs.  I'm not sure if it's because it's right at the knees, or if it would have felt that way even if it was lower on her leg. I do really like the powder in the air and the tone of the picture. http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/09/50bb8dc3102aa_m.jpg

Dec 10 12 04:56 pm Link