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Model

Amanda J Foster

Posts: 729

New York, New York, US

Helppppppp.

Dec 02 12 07:53 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/12/50a6a91a4c66d_m.jpg
Bad pose and too much of you is obscured. This is about your armpits.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121018/17/5080a50170ba5_m.jpg
Unflattering and half the face is hidden.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/12/50a6a8e978c65_m.jpg
The left panel is unflattering; dour expression and the slump is unappealing. The right panel, there's nothing there to unflatter.

Dec 02 12 07:58 pm Link

Photographer

Shirley Zhong

Posts: 2156

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

It's always easier to suggest which pictures to keep than to delete.

My suggestion is you keep these:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120912/20/50514f0b4634e_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/502072ec328e2_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/18/50207336bd568_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/21/501df917b59f9_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121112/04/50a0e81d97d5d_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/21/501a049545dae_m.jpg

EDIT: I see that you just made some changes. May I suggest that maybe you can put something of a different facial expression since most of your pictures are only showing one kind now... just my two cents.

Dec 02 12 08:05 pm Link

Model

Amanda J Foster

Posts: 729

New York, New York, US

Thanks!

Dec 03 12 08:47 pm Link

Model

Amanda J Foster

Posts: 729

New York, New York, US

I need help again. I have a new photo to add! Help me figure out which ONE to delete.

Dec 04 12 06:45 pm Link

Photographer

Kev Lawson

Posts: 7808

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Out of those you have, this is probably my least favorite:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/20/50bc24ca42742_m.jpg

Dec 04 12 06:50 pm Link

Photographer

GNapp Studios

Posts: 6208

Somerville, New Jersey, US

You are very very good but that avatar has to go.

Dec 04 12 06:54 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8819

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/20/50bc24ca42742_m.jpg
This one can go

Dec 05 12 04:16 am Link