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Model

Tarissa Gesner

Posts: 109

Clinton, New Jersey, US

Give me your input positive or negative.

Dec 04 12 03:16 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8820

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/18/50beb7b6b45a4_m.jpg
Great eyes in this image, but the hand pose makes me think you have a tooth ach

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/18/50beb79763205_m.jpg
This is good
Some observations:
Rotate chin toward floor just a bit to center eyes in sockets
Think long sexy fingers
Show your body’s mid section, your right elbow is against your hip hiding the outline, different pose of arm extend along leg will put a gap between waist and arm

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/17/50bea233da7a1_m.jpg
Not a fan of this image
Too much head tilt
Body too square to camera
Hiding one of your beautiful eyes behind a sucker
Move hair off notch of elbow on your left side


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/15/50be83dabda63_m.jpg
Too much head tilt, looking up the models nose generally not the most flattering of angles

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110525/18/4dddad9042c29_m.jpg
Least favorite


Over all you have a great look and some strong images

Wish you well

Dec 05 12 04:58 am Link

Model

Tarissa Gesner

Posts: 109

Clinton, New Jersey, US

Thank you! :-)

Dec 05 12 08:41 am Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 1918

Oak Ridge, Tennessee, US

I agree with Lee P., and I think you have a great shape.

Dec 05 12 11:44 pm Link