Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Berangere 30 years ol friends ask me to do some beauty , i try to a different red background for perhap's play on it ..she's professionnal dancer

perhap's you wiill find somethink you love

http://mm-s4.marievaubourgeix.com

http://mm-s4.marievaubourgeix.com/pl-berangere.jpg

http://mm-s4.marievaubourgeix.com/pl-berangere2.jpg
http://mm-s4.marievaubourgeix.com/pl-berangere3.jpg

it's a long time i didn't send raw .. here you can find raw . I ask never post before and after on Facebook.

RESPECT the model and make up. Don't change them just correct them.
THIS RAW are only for retoucher to improve there portfolio. NO COMMERCIAL USE ARE ALLOW

my email for personal question and contact : stefan.officiel@gmail.com

my website : www.sbourson.com

On my JOB i only work with retoucher i allready work with them. But to improve my work and personal portfolio i do free test .. and allways available for collaboration.

Dec 07 12 01:02 am Link

Retoucher

nebulaoperator

Posts: 345

London, England, United Kingdom

Stefan,

Some files are missing there on the RAW link you provided the last one that available on the spread sheet and the link is 9741. Do you have others available too?
Thanks

Dec 07 12 02:16 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

oh yes many are missing they are on way

Dec 07 12 02:51 am Link

Retoucher

nebulaoperator

Posts: 345

London, England, United Kingdom

Thanks

Dec 07 12 03:36 am Link

Retoucher

Dess Maximova

Posts: 57

Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria

http://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/530517_10151165118698325_861933757_n.jpg

Dec 07 12 07:33 am Link

Retoucher

Helena

Posts: 194

Pervomaysk, Mykolayivs'ka, Ukraine

are any mistakes or suggestions?
http://cs407628.userapi.com/v407628890/2f27/rUXJaLWqJXU.jpg

Dec 07 12 11:47 am Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7334/9681forum.jpg

Uploaded with ImageShack.us
Thanks for the practice images. Lovely model.

Dec 07 12 02:18 pm Link

Retoucher

Maria laCroix

Posts: 45

BÃ¥tsfjord, Finnmark, Norway

thnx for sharing!

My try smile

http://firepic.org/images/2012-12/08/mucwke3ia9sy.jpg

Dec 07 12 04:19 pm Link

Retoucher

Rolando Garcia

Posts: 143

Asia, Lima Provincias, Peru

my first try....

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7243/berangerenoelitamg9891.jpg

Uploaded with ImageShack.us

Dec 07 12 08:26 pm Link

Retoucher

Rpixretouching

Posts: 355

Perris, California, US

I hope this time you don't hate it so much, as the one in your other thread, NO worries I don't take  it to the heart ...... Peace.
http://www.mediafire.com/conv/dcdda1b1a83e11a3e66b52508a77113d7c7f79bd6df8588d73a47a00983850516g.jpg

Dec 07 12 09:16 pm Link

Retoucher

vtrantien

Posts: 718

Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam

My version:

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8500/8254485738_a0aae192f0_c.jpg

Dec 07 12 11:21 pm Link

Retoucher

Natalya Belaya

Posts: 356

Donetsk, Donetsk, Ukraine

Thanks for the pics!
http://jpegshare.net/images/f4/a9/f4a9e6b65c12e07326b03a8d8bdff819.jpg

Dec 08 12 01:58 am Link

Retoucher

Anna Kirikova

Posts: 72

Saint Petersburg, Saint Petersburg, Russia

May I use this one in my retouching portfolio?

http://img-fotki.yandex.ru/get/6502/29775054.3c/0_b9483_a28d1889_orig

Dec 08 12 02:34 am Link

Retoucher

Alena_retouch

Posts: 66

Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia

http://s2.uploads.ru/TCAjs.jpg
http://s2.uploads.ru/aW4GO.jpg

Dec 08 12 03:11 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

vtrantien wrote:
My version:

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8500/8254485738_a0aae192f0_c.jpg

i don't understand why but it's look like green on my computer

Dec 08 12 04:07 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Alena_retouch wrote:
http://s2.uploads.ru/TCAjs.jpg
http://s2.uploads.ru/aW4GO.jpg

good work but i never like modification of one make up ..... it's beauty work and one make up one work it , you work is too improve a picture and a make up not make new one

Dec 08 12 04:09 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Anna Kirikova wrote:
May I use this one in my retouching portfolio?

http://img-fotki.yandex.ru/get/6502/29775054.3c/0_b9483_a28d1889_orig

not fan of this too much white color but not bad at all , good job

Dec 08 12 04:09 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Natali-retoucher wrote:
Thanks for the pics!
http://jpegshare.net/images/f4/a9/f4a9e6b65c12e07326b03a8d8bdff819.jpg

it's look like perfect in small good work

Dec 08 12 04:10 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Maria laCroix wrote:
thnx for sharing!

My try smile

http://firepic.org/images/2012-12/08/mucwke3ia9sy.jpg

orange is perhap's too much no ?? i think that disturb picture

Dec 08 12 04:10 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

DessRetouch wrote:
http://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/530517_10151165118698325_861933757_n.jpg

really really good work again

Dec 08 12 04:11 am Link

Retoucher

True Retouch

Posts: 29

London, England, United Kingdom

Dec 08 12 05:51 am Link

Retoucher

Rpixretouching

Posts: 355

Perris, California, US

LOL  you are forgetting this is a share for practice forum,this  is not to make you happy with the results, there's a special forum for critics, you're going  a little bit to far believe me, I will keep an eye before contacting  moderators about you.  post and don't worry how the results  THIS IS A PRACTICE AND CHALLANGE FORUM not a doit the way I want it.


read this from the moderator:

Kevin_Connery wrote:
Additional Commentary

The intent of this forum is to provide retouchers with a place to practice their work, or engage in friendly contests, or similar. It is NOT intended as a way for photographers to have their images retouched for free.

This is NOT a 'do my work for free' forum.  If you provide samples for other members to play with, you may not require that those members send you high resolution versions of their results, nor may you demand a particular style.
This includes posts stating it, PMs demanding it, or in any other way insisting, suggesting, or requesting that such files be provided. Individuals who violate this may be prohibited from posting in this forum.

Contests and such may specify a particular goal, and use that as a criteria for 'winning', but entries may not be restricted to only that style/goal.

In short, if you want to share your images with others, you are encouraged to do so here. If you have some form of legitimate contest, you are encouraged to do so here. If you want someone to provide retouching for you, consider placing a casting call.

sbourson wrote:

good work but i never like modification of one make up ..... it's beauty work and one make up one work it , you work is too improve a picture and a make up not make new one

Dec 08 12 10:49 am Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

Thats kind of harsh isnt it? Critique may not be the intent of the forum but the opinion from an experienced and talented eye is something that everyone who is learning can benefit from.

Dec 08 12 11:16 am Link

Retoucher

Dess Maximova

Posts: 57

Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria

Megan E Griscom wrote:
Thats kind of harsh isnt it? Critique may not be the intent of the forum but the opinion from an experienced and talented eye is something that everyone who is learning can benefit from.

+1

Dec 08 12 01:29 pm Link

Retoucher

Rpixretouching

Posts: 355

Perris, California, US

Megan E Griscom wrote:
Thats kind of harsh isnt it? Critique may not be the intent of the forum but the opinion from an experienced and talented eye is something that everyone who is learning can benefit from.

No question about it but that's why MM has create this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=77   and  the experience in the industry  does not  give you the right to put other people's work down.  neither  you are above the law, in this case MM rules. thanks
Read this and tell me if is necessary to go this far.

sbourson wrote:
this retouch is horrible with that make up.. sorry i hate this work

Dec 08 12 02:47 pm Link

Retoucher

BorderlineBunny

Posts: 2201

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

digiretouch365 wrote:

Megan E Griscom wrote:
Thats kind of harsh isnt it? Critique may not be the intent of the forum but the opinion from an experienced and talented eye is something that everyone who is learning can benefit from.

No question about it but that's why MM has create this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=77   and  the experience in the industry  does not  give you the right to put other people's work down.  neither  you are above the law, in this case MM rules. thanks
Read this and tell me if is necessary to go this far.

Tough love. He gave me a critique quite like this when I first started retouching and it was what convinced me to stop the blurring crap and learn the high end techniques and practice practice practice. I actually went a whole month not doing any paid work and just sitting and learning and practicing because of it. Were my feelings hurt? Yep. Pride too. But that harsh critique actually made my career in retouching. That was around a year ago.

Dec 08 12 04:14 pm Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

BorderlineBunny wrote:
Tough love. He gave me a critique quite like this when I first started retouching and it was what convinced me to stop the blurring crap and learn the high end techniques and practice practice practice. I actually went a whole month not doing any paid work and just sitting and learning and practicing because of it. Were my feelings hurt? Yep. Pride too. But that harsh critique actually made my career in retouching. That was around a year ago.

+1 (i think that means  'I agree'...)

Dec 08 12 04:19 pm Link

Retoucher

PWF Retouch

Posts: 290

Jacksonville, North Carolina, US

Thanks for the great images to workon. I'll have something for you soon

Dec 08 12 06:15 pm Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7135/9964forum2.jpg

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Let me know what you think...thank you again.

Dec 08 12 07:03 pm Link

Retoucher

vtrantien

Posts: 718

Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam

Next:

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8354/8257214540_06689b20d3_c.jpg

Dec 08 12 10:56 pm Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Helena  wrote:
are any mistakes or suggestions?
http://cs407628.userapi.com/v407628890/2f27/rUXJaLWqJXU.jpg

no more than GOOD WORK ^^

Dec 09 12 06:20 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

digiretouch365 wrote:
LOL  you are forgetting this is a share for practice forum,this  is not to make you happy with the results, there's a special forum for critics, you're going  a little bit to far believe me, I will keep an eye before contacting  moderators about you.  post and don't worry how the results  THIS IS A PRACTICE AND CHALLANGE FORUM not a doit the way I want it.


read this from the moderator:

Kevin_Connery wrote:
Additional Commentary

The intent of this forum is to provide retouchers with a place to practice their work, or engage in friendly contests, or similar. It is NOT intended as a way for photographers to have their images retouched for free.

This is NOT a 'do my work for free' forum.  If you provide samples for other members to play with, you may not require that those members send you high resolution versions of their results, nor may you demand a particular style.
This includes posts stating it, PMs demanding it, or in any other way insisting, suggesting, or requesting that such files be provided. Individuals who violate this may be prohibited from posting in this forum.

Contests and such may specify a particular goal, and use that as a criteria for 'winning', but entries may not be restricted to only that style/goal.

In short, if you want to share your images with others, you are encouraged to do so here. If you have some form of legitimate contest, you are encouraged to do so here. If you want someone to provide retouching for you, consider placing a casting call.

i GIVE MY OPINION THAT'S MY PARTICIPATION TOO IN PHOTOGRAPHER & PROFESSIONNAL BEAUTY PHOTOGRAPHER ...

you make a work i can said if i like or not the Picture, because first MODEL & MAKE UP ARTIST WORK with me for those picture and my job is to make attention people respect them. 
Second part you want to be professional , don't forgot your job is not to make what you want but make professional work of retouch.

Then if you love your work OKAY but if that don't respect the model and the make up  if will not accept you use this picture ANYWHERE . If you don't respect my work no problem just DON'T PUT MY NAME on the picture.

Dec 09 12 06:23 am Link

Photographer

sbourson

Posts: 579

Paris, Île-de-France, France

digiretouch365 wrote:

Megan E Griscom wrote:
Thats kind of harsh isnt it? Critique may not be the intent of the forum but the opinion from an experienced and talented eye is something that everyone who is learning can benefit from.

No question about it but that's why MM has create this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=77   and  the experience in the industry  does not  give you the right to put other people's work down.  neither  you are above the law, in this case MM rules. thanks
Read this and tell me if is necessary to go this far.

I can't write easyly in english many work to make you happy, but i allways said RESPECT MODEL & MAKE UP .  your retouch is the baddest is saw / if you like it , It's your problem... but do you really like that shadow , skin work ..  RETOUCHING is improve picture not make it baddest. and RESPECT PEOPLE WHO WORKED Before you the picture

Dec 09 12 06:29 am Link

Retoucher

BorderlineBunny

Posts: 2201

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd513/borderlinebunny/berangere_noelita__MG_9961.jpg
http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd513/borderlinebunny/berangere_noelita__MG_9961big.jpg
Gorgeous photos.

Dec 09 12 07:40 am Link

Retoucher

Jas retouch

Posts: 105

Tuzla, Federacija Bosna i Hercegovina, Bosnia and Herzegovina

http://i1352.photobucket.com/albums/q657/Js5m1na/berangere_noelita__MG_9684copyCopy-1.jpg http://i1352.photobucket.com/albums/q657/Js5m1na/berangere_noelita__MG_9684CopyCopy-1.jpg

Dec 09 12 09:53 am Link

Retoucher

Gizer

Posts: 175

Moscow, Moscow, Russia

http://i1078.photobucket.com/albums/w488/DrunkHard/berangere_noelita__MG_0069E.jpg
http://i1078.photobucket.com/albums/w488/DrunkHard/berangere_noelita__MG_0069bw.jpg

Dec 09 12 11:00 am Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/420/0069bwforum.jpg

Uploaded with ImageShack.us

Still working on the color version..thought the shadows were pretty in bw.  Thanks for the photos..

Dec 09 12 02:57 pm Link

Retoucher

Megan E Griscom

Posts: 494

Bordentown, New Jersey, US

I lowered the contrast on this image...Not sure why it got so dark...

http://imageshack.us/a/img40/2820/9964forum3.jpg


http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/4602/9964crop.jpg

http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/8247/9964crop2.jpg

Dec 09 12 09:21 pm Link

Model

efrenster

Posts: 260

Urdaneta, Ilocos, Philippines

my try EFRENSTER PHOTORETOUCH
can i use my port?
http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/n523/efrenster/stfan933x1400.jpg

Dec 09 12 10:04 pm Link

Retoucher

Martin Jonas

Posts: 61

Güstrow, Mecklenburg-West Pommerania, Germany

http://img3.fotos-hochladen.net/uploads/berangerenoeliu2t9b1l6ej.jpg

Dec 09 12 11:29 pm Link