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Model

hamishearl

Posts: 3

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

Your review of one or more of my photos would be appreciated.

Dec 09 12 06:03 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

You're very new. You need to work with photographers. Your avatar is decent for now, but once you get better quality, delete everything in there.

Delete these:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#30853033
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30852998

As they do not show you anyway.

Dec 09 12 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Deirdre Holmes

Posts: 1264

San Pedro, California, US

hamishearl wrote:
Your review of one or more of my photos would be appreciated.

Your photos look new. As a whole, a nice snapshot portfolio. It leaves me with the feeling that you are a beginner and a nice person.

Dec 09 12 06:23 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8825

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Great photos make a great portfolio

Add a great head shot
Add a full length dressed in a suit or tux

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Dec 10 12 05:24 am Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

to cut thru the crap- your pictures reveal no qualities/reasons to pursue modeling on any level other than as an unpaid hobby.

Dec 10 12 07:02 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

Mark wrote:
to cut thru the crap- your pictures reveal no qualities/reasons to pursue modeling on any level other than as an unpaid hobby.

Since he is -- by his own admission -- just starting out, there's little harm in getting in more shoots with the best photographers willing to work with him.

Dec 11 12 03:36 am Link

Photographer

Glenn Liam Kelly

Posts: 41

Mackay, Queensland, Australia

The second one captioned side is a nice pose by you but a pretty poor photo. The background is messy, lighting flat, skin tone washed out and lacking in detail. Now imaging that pose captured by a professional with those problems fixed. That would be an image you could use to sell yourself to an agency or prospective client.

Dec 11 12 05:30 am Link

Photographer

Supermodel Photographer

Posts: 3309

Oyster Bay, New York, US

hamishearl wrote:
Insert Criticism here   C+

Dec 11 12 05:41 am Link

Model

hamishearl

Posts: 3

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

Thank you all for the feedback, much appreciated.

Dec 14 12 03:31 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

Delete these because they do not show you at all. They are poorly shot, poorly lit, blurry.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30853033
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30852998

Never ever use cell phone pics in your portfolio!! If you must have one to update your look then fine but this is just a weird shot.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30776339

Dec 16 12 12:41 am Link