Forums > Critique > Good picture or no ? why ?

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

New picture:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121209/03/50c473ba9ab37_m.jpg

Dec 10 12 12:00 pm Link

Model

EmilyDoll

Posts: 399

Fontana, California, US

i would go to the water park everyday just to see you hahah i like it

Dec 10 12 12:02 pm Link

Photographer

JBerman Photography

Posts: 1113

New York, New York, US

get rid of the kids in the background...please!

Dec 10 12 12:05 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

Really?
thank you very much. If you want to add me and comment on my photos if you want.
Beautiful photo of you

Dec 10 12 12:05 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

I would love only I am not retoucher I give as

Dec 10 12 12:07 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

JBerman Photography wrote:
get rid of the kids in the background...please!

I would love only I am not retoucher I give as

Dec 10 12 12:18 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

EmilyDoll wrote:
i would go to the water park everyday just to see you hahah i like it

Really?
thank you very much. If you want to add me and comment on my photos if you want.
Beautiful photo of you

Dec 10 12 12:19 pm Link

Photographer

name removed3

Posts: 264

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Fabien B  wrote:

I would love only I am not retoucher I give as

go to pixlr.com and add a layer and blur it, then add layer mask, its easy to blur a background

Dec 10 12 12:19 pm Link

Photographer

B R U N E S C I

Posts: 25319

Bath, England, United Kingdom

No. It's a snapshot.

Models need professional images or polariods. Not snapshots.





Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano
www.stefanobrunesci.com

Dec 10 12 12:27 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

Northern Lights Images wrote:

go to pixlr.com and add a layer and blur it, then add layer mask, its easy to blur a background

Thank's

Dec 10 12 12:27 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

-B-R-U-N-E-S-C-I- wrote:
No. It's a snapshot.

Models need professional images or polariods. Not snapshots.





Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano
www.stefanobrunesci.com

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Dec 10 12 12:29 pm Link

Photographer

Evan Hiltunen

Posts: 3249

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Fabien B  wrote:
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It is a very good snapshot.

With a very good, professional photographer I could see you getting great images.

Dec 10 12 12:41 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

Seeing the children in the background makes me uncomfortable.

Dec 10 12 12:45 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

Evan Hiltunen wrote:

It is a very good snapshot.

With a very good, professional photographer I could see you getting great images.

The pictures are beautiful. The problem is that I'm French.
The French have their charms smile

Dec 10 12 12:48 pm Link

Model

Fabien B

Posts: 19

Nantes, Pays-de-la-Loire, France

Cole Morrison wrote:
Seeing the children in the background makes me uncomfortable.

Yes I have the abducted

Dec 10 12 12:49 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

Fabien B  wrote:

Yes I have the abducted

yikes

Dec 10 12 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

DOUGLASFOTOS

Posts: 8452

Los Angeles, California, US

OP...please ask your photographer to redo this picture. Take away the KIDS in the background..it is 100% creepy and why are you allowing the photographer/friends shooting you in a public swimming pool?

Lighting..make sure it is all even and not streaky...It is a total unbalanced shot.

Dec 10 12 01:00 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

You could pay a retoucher to fix it if you like it that much. But the kids in the background is a little weird. Just get rid of it

Dec 10 12 03:16 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

terrible as in b-a-d.  come on man if you want to be a model you have to know better . You have a ridiculous look on your face, nothing fashionable going on and an obvious snap shot.

Dec 10 12 06:34 pm Link

Photographer

Matt Forma

Posts: 373

Denver, Colorado, US

Leave it to Mark to always lay it down with brute force

Dec 11 12 03:14 pm Link