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Photographer

Gallery de Aphrodite

Posts: 343

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

and why?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121210/17/50c68a415517b_m.jpg

Dec 10 12 05:22 pm Link

Photographer

Guss W

Posts: 10637

Clearwater, Florida, US

Keep.
She's wonderfully framed within the environment, dressed right, and gracefully posed.

Dec 10 12 10:48 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8842

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121210/17/50c68a415517b_m.jpg

Composition:
The model appears to be dead center

Pose:
Models left arm seems quite straight

Color:
Seems off, her black hair seems blue

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Dec 11 12 06:00 am Link

Photographer

Gallery de Aphrodite

Posts: 343

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Yeah ... I kinda wish I was a little more careful and made sure both arms are visible ...

but is dead center a bad thing ... i actually cropped it to make her dead center ... to make it more symmetrical ...

and I guess I have to spend a little more time on the colors ... after you said it ... I kinda noticed that her face and arms are different color too ! lol !

Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121210/17/50c68a415517b_m.jpg

Composition:
The model appears to be dead center

Pose:
Models left arm seems quite straight

Color:
Seems off, her black hair seems blue

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Dec 11 12 06:11 am Link