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Photographer

Michael Fournier

Posts: 5

Quebec, Quebec, Canada

Dear friends,

I'd be curious to hear any constructive critiques about my artworks, please feel free to drop a line. smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/1746280/viewall

Dec 20 12 10:13 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Fournier

Posts: 5

Quebec, Quebec, Canada

My goal in getting critiques? I just want to use MM as a social network, get people to comment and critiques my pictures and I shall do the same to others!

Dec 20 12 10:16 pm Link

Photographer

Guss W

Posts: 10637

Clearwater, Florida, US

Very, very nice.

Just a couple of thoughts -

The girl in the chair with cigarette is sufficiently different in style and mood from the rest that perhaps it should not be part of the group.

A picture should have a focal point of interest within the image that the eye is drawn to.  In a portrait, this would usually be the face.  I'm not seeing that in the photo of the back-bending girl, and my eye tends to wander around the image.  While the picture shows off her unique talents, I'm not sure it's showing off yours.

Dec 21 12 04:34 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Fournier

Posts: 5

Quebec, Quebec, Canada

Guss W wrote:
Very, very nice.

Just a couple of thoughts -

The girl in the chair with cigarette is sufficiently different in style and mood from the rest that perhaps it should not be part of the group.

A picture should have a focal point of interest within the image that the eye is drawn to.  In a portrait, this would usually be the face.  I'm not seeing that in the photo of the back-bending girl, and my eye tends to wander around the image.  While the picture shows off her unique talents, I'm not sure it's showing off yours.

You're so right ! Thank you for your time!

Dec 21 12 10:20 pm Link