Photographer

Peter Trimboli Photography

Posts: 12

Jacksonville, Florida, US

I'd love feedback and comments on my pictures.  Please feel free to take a look at my port, offer feedback, critique or positive comments. 
Thanks!

Dec 22 12 10:21 pm Link

Photographer

Veit Photo

Posts: 667

London, England, United Kingdom

Some nice visual ideas, such as this:



But basic elements of photographic technique are clearly lacking in our port. I see camera shake because your shutter speed is too low.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121219/18/50d271ee2cee7_m.jpg

Also I'm not sure whether deep shadows like in the image above really suit the subject.

There are also issues with focus and overexposure elsewhere.
Your subject matter is good, it's something that you could develop by honing your camera technique and applying some post-production.
The first two images in your first row would benefit from a reflective disc to light up the faces of your models.

Dec 23 12 04:20 am Link