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Louie Max

Posts: 1

Bayside, New York, US

Would love feedback on my List Spirit of a Woman.  Good, Bad, Indifferent
All are welcome.  Thanks in advance  !
Louie

Dec 25 12 01:21 pm Link

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my_other_profile

Posts: 666

Ankeny, Iowa, US

First off, the list appears to be all your stuff, which is not, I think, the purpose of lists on MM.  You pretty much just reposted your portfolio.

Second -- and I'm not a professional, so take this with a grain of salt -- is the quality of the images.

Everything appears to be poorly focused and poorly lit.  If there's a unifying theme, I don't understand what it is.  And then, there are these:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120923/18/505fbabf06216_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/18/508894aa8b75f.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/18/5088957dee806.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121225/12/50da089b5f629.jpg

Which are just wholly disconcerting.

(The first one -- her legs look like little doll legs, stuck on.  Second one -- random hand bra?  Third one -- is that a dude's face on a woman's legs?  If so, that's funny and I like the idea, somehow, but the image...actually, that might be your best image.  Forget I mentioned it.  And the last one...is on your other list...but...maybe at least some retouching?)

Dec 27 12 05:52 am Link

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TDSImages

Posts: 854

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

my_other_profile wrote:
First off, the list appears to be all your stuff, which is not, I think, the purpose of lists on MM.  You pretty much just reposted your portfolio.

Second -- and I'm not a professional, so take this with a grain of salt -- is the quality of the images.

Everything appears to be poorly focused and poorly lit.  If there's a unifying theme, I don't understand what it is.  And then, there are these:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120923/18/505fbabf06216_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/18/508894aa8b75f.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/18/5088957dee806.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121225/12/50da089b5f629.jpg

Which are just wholly disconcerting.

(The first one -- her legs look like little doll legs, stuck on.  Second one -- random hand bra?  Third one -- is that a dude's face on a woman's legs?  If so, that's funny and I like the idea, somehow, but the image...actually, that might be your best image.  Forget I mentioned it.  And the last one...is on your other list...but...maybe at least some retouching?)

+1

Dec 27 12 06:28 am Link