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As I'm still learning I would like your opinions on my portfolio. Where am I lacking, areas of improvement, etc. Thanks for your time. Dec 26 12 01:57 am Link  This is a nice picture However you are cutting hands off Eyes do not seem as sharp as they could be Whites of eyes and teeth seem over processed  This would really feel better if the hands were included  Model is way to centered The fence is a big distraction Model cut in half by pipe running through her mid section Think long fingers not a fist  Models right knee is locked Toes in negative pose [pointed in] Move models left arm away from body to show her form Dec 26 12 07:23 am Link Thank you. I see exactly what you are saying and I will improve. My only question is what do you mean the model is too centered? Dec 26 12 05:31 pm Link M Worsley Photography wrote: I think he means the model is centered in the frame. With a full body shot like this, you might want to use the rule of thirds and place her toward one side and have her body turned slightly toward the open space. And he's also right about her hands: they should be open, not fisted. Dec 27 12 02:58 am Link DavidCoward Photography wrote: Gotcha. Thanks. Any other tips would be greatly appreciated. Dec 27 12 09:19 am Link |
