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Photographer

AWStudios

Posts: 18

Royal Oak, Michigan, US

Just started doing some photography using models this year and looking for critiques.  Hopefully constructive... but honesty is definitely appreciated.  What am I really lacking, or need the most work on.  Thanks!

Dec 26 12 09:33 am Link

Makeup Artist

ArtistryImage

Posts: 2963

Washington, District of Columbia, US

AWStudios wrote:
...What am I really lacking...

male talent in your book...
To be taken seriously as a commercial lens person you need to consider having a healthy gender mix in your book...

that said, this is a rather compelling visual statement... kudos to the team here...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121220/10/50d35e23633c9.jpg

all the best on your journey....

Dec 26 12 11:01 am Link

Photographer

AWStudios

Posts: 18

Royal Oak, Michigan, US

ArtistryImage wrote:

male talent in your book...
To be taken seriously as a commercial lens person you need to consider having a healthy gender mix in your book...

that said, this is a rather compelling visual statement... kudos to the team here...

all the best on your journey....

Thank you!

Dec 26 12 11:15 am Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2871

Broomfield, Colorado, US

Your white backgrounds are grey.  Use a background light at least at the level of the light on the model to get the background to a pleasing white.

Dec 27 12 06:20 pm Link