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Jackson frontier photos

Posts: 531

Joplin, Missouri, US

My first casting call is up.  Please tell me if I should have included or left out anything. 

http://www.modelmayhem.com/casting/1663212

Thanks

Jan 04 13 06:57 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2027

Chicago, Illinois, US

There may be a comma missing from your second paragraph.  I'm not sure, I'm not very good with comas.

All images plus money... Very generous. 

You give more infoemation than I usually do, so it otta be OK

Jan 04 13 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

Jackson frontier photos

Posts: 531

Joplin, Missouri, US

Yeah, around here I may have to pay models to look at it.  Thanks for the feedback.

Jan 04 13 07:23 pm Link

Hair Stylist

Platform Artist

Posts: 157

Chicago, Illinois, US

looks good!

Jan 04 13 07:34 pm Link