Forums > Critique > new alternative and lingerie sets. critique?

Model

Miaa Rigby

Posts: 361

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

revamped/updated a good chunk of my portfolio.  Comments, critique, and compliments appreciated.  wink

Jan 04 13 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

Overall, things I like:

attractive
good figure
great legs
openness
ability to pose
good face and eyes
versatility

Things I don't care for as much

a few shots that add noting to your port.

other than that, I don't think you really have many negative aspects to your port. Oh sure, I suppose I could nitpick a bit, but other then needing to get rid of a handful of shots, I am truly impressed with your work. Congrats!

Jan 04 13 08:35 pm Link

Model

Miaa Rigby

Posts: 361

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Thank you.  Feel free to tell me which photos you didnt like because I should have new ones soon I'll need to swap out.

Jan 04 13 08:42 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6386

Champaign, Illinois, US

don't care for these. Either the lighting is bad, or are slightly redundant, or they simply don't make you look very good........and by your port, I can see that you can look very very good

some 18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31157389
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31157382
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31157360
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21804943

I know some other people may pick some others to boot, but I think that would start to infringe a bit much on your creative process, which I like and admire. Good luck and hope to see more of your creativity on the future.

P.S.--listing a few of your shots

Jan 04 13 08:55 pm Link