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Thurston Photography

Posts: 29

Williston, Vermont, US

Hey all! I was wondering what you all thought about this image? I am open to critique and would love to hear what you guys have to say. (I know there is only a light in one of the eyes, BUT other then that...) https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/72223_325840820863127_1206119472_n.jpg

Jan 07 13 08:56 am Link

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NewBoldPhoto

Posts: 4995

PORT MURRAY, New Jersey, US

Thurston Photography wrote:
Hey all! I was wondering what you all thought about this image? I am open to critique and would love to hear what you guys have to say. (I know there is only a light in one of the eyes, BUT other then that...) https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/72223_325840820863127_1206119472_n.jpg

Honestly- get rid of this image. The point of highest contrast is the one speck of a light in one eye. The composition is a fail (Google: rule of thirds ). The poor girl has raccoon eyes and ratty haystack hair- have some respect for your model. The dress is all contorted and lumpy looking and the whole thing looks hazy and underexposed.
sorry but no - just remove it and we will pretend it never happened.

Jan 08 13 07:48 pm Link

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AlyssaMichelle Photo

Posts: 512

Lake Forest, California, US

NewBoldPhoto wrote:

Honestly- get rid of this image. The point of highest contrast is the one speck of a light in one eye. The composition is a fail (Google: rule of thirds ). The poor girl has raccoon eyes and ratty haystack hair- have some respect for your model. The dress is all contorted and lumpy looking and the whole thing looks hazy and underexposed.
sorry but no - just remove it and we will pretend it never happened.

+1

Jan 14 13 05:07 pm Link