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kurtvandeweerdt

Posts: 65

Dilsen-Stokkem, Limburg, Belgium

Updated with some new pictures! Opinions appreciated!

Jan 11 13 02:40 pm Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

They say every picture tells a story.

I am having a tough time figuring out the 'stories' behind your new images.

Why is a woman dressed to the nines with full makeup on lying in what appears to be an empty bathtub and apparently happy about being there?

Why is the guy grabbing the woman's arm? Is he trying to steal her purse or keep her from leaving him?

Maybe, you know, I don't... If you wanted to create mystery and confusion, you succeeded. The images are nice, but don't communicate the 'story' very well. If the images were to show off the clothes, the situations took the attention off the clothes.

Just my opinion.

Jan 11 13 05:51 pm Link