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Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Post an image (or link)
I'll write a concise
verse in the ancient form of
five, seven, five beats


Later today, 16 Jan 2013, I'll write a 5-7-5 poem commenting on your image

Jan 16 13 07:57 am Link

Model

Jojo West

Posts: 972

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Jan 16 13 09:48 am Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5040

Petaluma, California, US

Jan 16 13 10:04 am Link

Model

Alivia Autumn

Posts: 610

Seattle, Washington, US

Sure pick one that inspires you smile

Jan 16 13 10:41 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2486

Los Angeles, California, US

I'm a sucker for poetry.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130116/11/50f6fcad4bf93.jpg

Jan 16 13 03:06 pm Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 899

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

This...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/15/50db89f9bdd78.jpg

Jan 16 13 04:26 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Jojo West wrote:
Okies.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … 413370.jpg

anticipation,
dressing up, going out, then
all alone: after

Jan 17 13 06:04 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

L Raye wrote:
18+ ?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … 579d86.jpg

the burden of the
sandstone sculpture eroding
in breeze and drizzle

Jan 17 13 06:06 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Alivia Autumn wrote:
Sure pick one that inspires you smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130115/13/50f5c4a0b5aac_m.jpg


repose on rich cloth
dispel defense- that stalwart
of studied languor

Jan 17 13 06:13 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
I'm a sucker for poetry.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130116/11/50f6fcad4bf93.jpg

sold as glamour, a
prison that poisons, seduced
by tobacco smoke

Jan 17 13 06:16 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

TDSImages wrote:
This...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/15/50db89f9bdd78.jpg

after the effort
of dressing and posing, sit
exhausted, expired

Jan 17 13 06:18 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Anyone else?

Jan 17 13 06:18 am Link

Model

Egle Aida Damulyte

Posts: 375

London, England, United Kingdom

Jan 17 13 06:24 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Egle Damulyte wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29447445  smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/09/501ff016280da_m.jpg

jaded too young, stares
in cool appraisal- years past-
spectral enchantress

Jan 17 13 06:31 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2486

Los Angeles, California, US

Light Writer wrote:
sold as glamour, a
prison that poisons, seduced
by tobacco smoke

Thanks!

If you are in the mood for another... wink

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31003846 18+

Jan 17 13 09:23 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Jan 17 13 09:31 am Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3377

Dallas, Texas, US

Hmmmmm...  :-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg

Jan 17 13 05:52 pm Link

Photographer

TDSImages

Posts: 899

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Light Writer wrote:

after the effort
of dressing and posing, sit
exhausted, expired

NICE...thank you!!!

Jan 17 13 06:02 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Bob Elliott Artist

Posts: 29

Rockville Centre, New York, US

Are you game for a drawing?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/06/50f028a7c57c2_m.jpg

Jan 18 13 07:21 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27373071 18+

rituals surround
the contained heart kept distanced
ceremonious

Jan 19 13 06:45 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5743

New York, New York, US

Light Writer wrote:

rituals surround
the contained heart kept distanced
ceremonious

I like! smile

Jan 21 13 05:37 pm Link

Photographer

Amul La La

Posts: 875

Saint Austell, England, United Kingdom

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120825/10/503906a5b7785_m.jpg



If you'd like to, I'd like this one (;

Jan 22 13 04:37 pm Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

Love this thread. I woul like to play with my avatar.

Jan 23 13 02:54 am Link

Model

Autumn Rose Brightly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Me please big_smile

Jan 23 13 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

EdwardKristopher wrote:
Hmmmmm...  :-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg

studied arts observed
at a distance remain so
unembraceable

Jan 23 13 06:45 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Bob Elliott Artist wrote:
Are you game for a drawing?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/06/50f028a7c57c2_m.jpg

abstract reminder
of intimacies exposed
displayed swanning form

Jan 23 13 06:48 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

A M U L wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120825/10/503906a5b7785_m.jpg



If you'd like to, I'd like this one (;

barbed tenderness a
bold leap defies, yet leaves white
geldings denied- dress

Jan 23 13 06:51 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
Love this thread. I woul like to play with my avatar.

light filters upon
secrets withheld-  mysteries
which shadows support

Jan 23 13 06:54 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Me please big_smile

unruled strands falling-
masked eyes cast longing looks-
hidden hands at play

Jan 23 13 06:57 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

three minutes and a
lifetime of experience
make quick work of art

Jan 23 13 06:58 pm Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3377

Dallas, Texas, US

Light Writer wrote:

studied arts observed
at a distance remain so
unembraceable

Thank you so much!  :-)

Jan 23 13 08:30 pm Link

Photographer

Shatter Leaf

Posts: 477

Houston, Texas, US

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af32/thebeginning88/_MG_9763-EDIT-sm_zps5d2bc7c3.jpg


Self portrait, would be cool to have a haiku smile

Jan 24 13 04:35 pm Link

Photographer

dcsmooth

Posts: 1232

Detroit, Michigan, US

Jan 25 13 06:34 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

Shatter Leaf wrote:
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af32/thebeginning88/_MG_9763-EDIT-sm_zps5d2bc7c3.jpg


Self portrait, would be cool to have a haiku smile

before appearing
outside- preparations done-
recovered- alone

Jan 25 13 07:51 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18387

Oakland, California, US

dcsmooth wrote:
This one, please.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21822351  18+

rigid rules inform
behavior's inhibitions-
strictly human hearts

Jan 25 13 07:55 am Link

Model

A M Y B

Posts: 127

Providence, Rhode Island, US

I'd like to play! Feel free to poke through my port smile

Jan 25 13 07:58 am Link

Photographer

Amul La La

Posts: 875

Saint Austell, England, United Kingdom

Light Writer wrote:

barbed tenderness a
bold leap defies, yet leaves white
geldings denied- dress

Thank you (beautuful)

(;

Jan 26 13 05:16 am Link

Photographer

dcsmooth

Posts: 1232

Detroit, Michigan, US

Light Writer wrote:

rigid rules inform
behavior's inhibitions-
strictly human hearts

Thanks!  That is awesome!

Jan 26 13 02:02 pm Link

Photographer

MidnightSun Designs

Posts: 360

WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130127/09/510567044fcae_m.jpg

Jan 31 13 02:52 pm Link

Model

Ceci L

Posts: 235

Villena, Valencia, Spain

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121129/11/50b7b5bc4218a_m.jpg

Jan 31 13 03:22 pm Link