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Model

Raquel Rayne

Posts: 1186

New York, New York, US

DONE. Thank you! smile

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A http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322378 That was easy, Thank you lovelies!

ETA:

Ok and now between these two, pretty please big_smile

C http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322427

or

D http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322426

Jan 16 13 09:43 pm Link

Photographer

MKPhoto

Posts: 5665

Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

A

delete B and don't show to anybody ever again wink

Jan 16 13 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

ReLe Photography

Posts: 61

Columbia, South Carolina, US

I'm not sure if there is a mood or feel you were going for, but I choose A.  IMO, it is a more sensual shot.  Very lovely.  B, on the other hand, has a weird vibe, due in no small part to your expression and your body language. 

For the second set:  D.  Pretty much the same ideas as above, although it is more the lack of seeing your face that kills C for me.  Your expression makes D so much better!

Hope this helped!

Reese

Jan 16 13 09:47 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

MKPhoto wrote:
A

delete B and don't show to anybody ever again wink

Jan 16 13 09:47 pm Link

Model

Raquel Rayne

Posts: 1186

New York, New York, US

Thanks!

Jan 16 13 09:47 pm Link

Photographer

SPV Photo

Posts: 789

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

D

Jan 16 13 09:55 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

C

Jan 16 13 10:12 pm Link

Photographer

DanaBarrett Photography

Posts: 1030

Franklin, Tennessee, US

d:

c has an odd crop for the image in my opinion.  love your expression with d.

Jan 16 13 10:43 pm Link

Model

Paige Morgan

Posts: 4058

New York, New York, US

D is awesome. Good lines in pose, strong expression.


C is kind of "meh" to me...and looks almost accidental, like they caught you between poses.

Jan 16 13 10:49 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

D

Jan 17 13 04:49 am Link

Photographer

William Kious

Posts: 8841

Delphos, Ohio, US

From an artistic standpoint, I would go with C. The mood you evoke seems more fitting to the location.

Image D really shows off your figure, but your expression just doesn't seem to suit the setting.

I say C.

Jan 17 13 05:00 am Link

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Model

Anna Adrielle

Posts: 18763

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

I actually don't think you have to choose between C or D, I think the images are different enough to have both smile

one is not better than the other, they're just different

Jan 17 13 05:03 am Link

Photographer

Jeffrey M Fletcher

Posts: 4344

Asheville, North Carolina, US

I also like both C and D. Use either, or both, they're good.

Jan 17 13 05:29 am Link

Photographer

MKPhoto

Posts: 5665

Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

I like the voyeuristic appeal of both, C more so than D. D is too joyful to be dark or to dark to be joyful, IMO. while C strikes the balance. D has some composition issues, too.

PS. Please take my comment on "B" with a smiley and grain of salt.

Jan 17 13 05:36 am Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

Both C and D are great photos. If I had to choose I'd have to like C better for the same voyeuristic and or candid reason. It is cropped a little oddly but I still like it

Jan 17 13 06:33 am Link

Artist/Painter

Bob Elliott Artist

Posts: 29

Rockville Centre, New York, US

D
The cropping of part of your body in C seems less than effective.

Jan 17 13 11:22 am Link

Model

Raquel Rayne

Posts: 1186

New York, New York, US

Hmm. I am still torn, as are the replies!

Jan 17 13 11:55 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 2695

Walnut Creek, California, US

Raquel Rayne wrote:
Hmm. I am still torn, as are the replies!

Then why did you delete C ?????????????????????????

Jan 17 13 04:44 pm Link

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Keila Sone

Posts: 127

Harrison, New Jersey, US

A

Jan 17 13 05:11 pm Link

Model

Raquel Rayne

Posts: 1186

New York, New York, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

Then why did you delete C ?????????????????????????

Haha, touche.

I finally chose!

Thank you all, I can be very indecisive.

Jan 17 13 08:55 pm Link