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Model

KolorzMilli

Posts: 1

Orlando, Florida, US

Hey I'm somewhat new here to the site but new to the forum I Hvnt been modeling long and I would love some tips on how to get better please check out my port and let me know. THANX BUNCHES
                                                                       KOLORZ

Jan 21 13 04:45 pm Link

Model

Shotglass Sally

Posts: 22

Chicago, Illinois, US

This is my favorite picture: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30332950

You also have a great smile :-)

As far as your over all port goes, remove all pictures where you are using a cell phone to take a self portrait. If absolutely necessary, have a friend take a couple basic pictures of you from a side/profile view and from the front. Face shots are good, but also include some full body shots.

Have fun :-)

Jan 21 13 10:20 pm Link

Model

Lisa Gardner

Posts: 2

Bend, Oregon, US

I would delete 2 3 4 5 I feel like they take away from the great shots you have or al least move them to the bottom. Self cell pics are kinda a no no. hope tho helps

Jan 26 13 04:40 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Hunter GWPB

Posts: 1545

King of Prussia, Pennsylvania, US

I think you wanted this:
NO NUDES OR NO IMPLIED
instead of  NO NUDES OR NO IMPLIED
to correct the code use a b or an I bracketed by [] instead of  and to end the bod and italics use [/] with the b or i following the / in the brackets.

Portfolio:  Do some TF work ASAP.  Get rid of the cell phone and fuzzy shots.
I like the one with the piano.

Jan 26 13 08:32 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8825

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Lisa Gardner wrote:
I would delete 2 3 4 5 I feel like they take away from the great shots you have or al least move them to the bottom. Self cell pics are kinda a no no. hope tho helps

Totally agree ^ _ ^

Sorry to thread hi jack but wow, some photographers get all the luck
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130124/10/510180c393107_m.jpg
You have a fantastic look

Jan 27 13 02:15 pm Link