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Model

Michaela-Ann

Posts: 161

Bendigo, Victoria, Australia

I need to cut down my port. I've done shoots in a lot of different styles and realise I need to cut down my port. I'm still figuring out what direction I want to go in, so any suggestions about that, as well as what images you think I should cull would be extremely helpful. In return I'll tell you my favourite image of yours and why. smile

Jan 22 13 02:29 pm Link

Model

Kess M

Posts: 8464

Brooklyn, New York, US

hmm
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31080135 i would lose this, it feels very stiff in a non-pinup way and a bit of a snapshot way, and the other one with the phone is much better. stay short and to the point, make each picture count.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#30364541 this- the other bridal ones are better
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#30298163 this, your face fades to nothingness
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#26573839 this- i like others better, the way that your back eye is totally hidden by the nose bugs me too. you have to be careful with 3/4 shots so you don't look crazy-eyed.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#30215958 again duplicates, i like the other cleopatra one better
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#24724844 this- your smile looks fake, and there is a better/similar one right before it
hope that is a helpful start smile
ps i love your face

Jan 22 13 02:43 pm Link

Model

Michaela-Ann

Posts: 161

Bendigo, Victoria, Australia

Kess M wrote:
hmm
hope that is a helpful start smile
ps i love your face

Thanks so much for your opinions smile
Although it was difficult to choose, this:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/11 … e7ad_m.jpg
is probably my favourite of yours, it's such a great shoot, I absolutely love you pose and expression.

Jan 22 13 02:49 pm Link

Photographer

PDF IMAGES PHOTOGRAPHY

Posts: 4603

Jacksonville, Florida, US

these are just MHO and likes of keepers...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121225/16/50da44b093ca4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121115/17/50a59226ceb95_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121104/19/50972f399e3fe_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120709/20/4ffb9c088f01d_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121015/23/507cf834de7e2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121015/23/507cf834de7e2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110831/17/4e5ed5c8144ff_m.jpg

others I would drop I just don't see the justice it does for you...again the work is good and nothing against the photographer, you and or others involved....it is just my opinion, best wishes !

Jan 22 13 02:58 pm Link

Jan 22 13 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8961

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

These are your greatest images, with these 4 one can see just how beautiful and lovely a model your are


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121225/16/50da44b093ca4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121030/14/50904d7c217db_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110831/17/4e5ed6cc62199_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110831/17/4e5ed5c8144ff_m.jpg

Jan 22 13 03:13 pm Link

Model

Michaela-Ann

Posts: 161

Bendigo, Victoria, Australia

PDF IMAGES PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
these are just MHO and likes of keepers...

others I would drop I just don't see the justice it does for you...again the work is good and nothing against the photographer, you and or others involved....it is just my opinion, best wishes !

Thank you for your opinions smile This is probably my favourite of yours, it's feels quite fashiony and I like the lighting:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130112/06/50f176ab07984_m.jpg

Jan 24 13 03:15 pm Link

Model

Michaela-Ann

Posts: 161

Bendigo, Victoria, Australia

sammyspade wrote:
You have amazing work in your port.

Drop these for sure:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31367538
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30654215
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30654212
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28368002
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25295920

Thank you, I have been considering dropping those, and now I think I will smile My favoutire of yours is this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31095311
I love the mood, it's very alluring and sexy.

Jan 24 13 03:18 pm Link

Model

Michaela-Ann

Posts: 161

Bendigo, Victoria, Australia

Lee_Photography wrote:
These are your greatest images, with these 4 one can see just how beautiful and lovely a model your are

Thank you smile My favourite of yours would probably be this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090324/21/49c9af432a5d4_m.jpg
It's a very nice portrait, you've captured the model's natural beauty well.

Jan 24 13 03:23 pm Link