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Model

Delaney Sproles

Posts: 11

Ojai, California, US

Added some recent work . . . feeling a little stuck ...

what to do next

advice?
criticism?
opinions?
hate it?
love it?

i don't know


talk to me : )

Jan 23 13 01:21 am Link

Model

Martina

Posts: 16

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

I think you look prettiest in the 2nd and 4th photos smile
If I only saw those two photos I would think you're a high fashion model already.

Martina
www.modelwear.blogspot.com

Jan 23 13 01:48 am Link

Model

Delaney Sproles

Posts: 11

Ojai, California, US

awh well thank you!

that is most definitely my goal. working at it everyday!

thanks for checking out my port

Jan 23 13 02:04 am Link

Photographer

Coyote Creations NW

Posts: 131

Vancouver, Washington, US

The first and second images are lovely both technically and from a modeling perspective.  You have everything you need, both appearance and skills.  Keep shooting!

Jan 23 13 08:48 pm Link

Photographer

Jean Renard Photography

Posts: 2080

Los Angeles, California, US

You have some decent shots, but not a brand or a well defined "look"

The danger of having styled images is that one can often lose the model in favor of the styling.

One of my casting directors was here and thought you "seemed" like you had a nice look but was not sure, and so would have passed.  This is a HUGE problem and will cost you jobs.  This was her favorite shot, not because of how cool the shot was, but it showcased you more than the others:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121213/12/50ca380e5f838_m.jpg

You need to focus your shots on establishing your look, less styling and concepts and more shots that show what you look like, then how you use what you have and finally what kind of emotion you can deliver.  Once you have that, then go for cool and edgy and everything else you might want to do.

Jan 24 13 03:02 am Link