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Retoucher

Paulfolio

Posts: 254

Worcester, England, United Kingdom

18+ http://i.imgur.com/HuO13kO.jpg

I am also a photographer shot this not just retouched it

Jan 24 13 02:36 pm Link

Model

MatureModelMM

Posts: 1173

Detroit, Michigan, US

I like it quite a lot, she looks simply beautiful and the pose shows off her delicate natural figure really nicely.  The light is perfect as well.

Jan 24 13 03:13 pm Link

Retoucher

Paulfolio

Posts: 254

Worcester, England, United Kingdom

thankyou, she was very nervous 2

I love this one 2

http://i.imgur.com/1gmrGy5l.jpg

Jan 24 13 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Something about the skin texture looks over retouched.
But in terms of the photo In general I think it's just ok.
I can't get past the models tense lips and eyes you said she was nervous and I can tell.
Overall great job for first time!

Jan 24 13 04:34 pm Link

Photographer

B R U N E S C I

Posts: 25319

Bath, England, United Kingdom

Rachel Reilly wrote:
Something about the skin texture looks over retouched.
But in terms of the photo In general I think it's just ok.

Keep working at it, and hands off the gaussian blur! big_smile

FWIW, I always feel that black backgrounds with nudes tend to scream "newb photographer" unless they are incredibly well done, so you might want to try something different next time.



Just my $0.02

Ciao
Stefano

www.stefanobrunesci.com

Jan 24 13 05:19 pm Link