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Model

Miluna V

Posts: 14

Dayton, Ohio, US

Just did my first studio shoot about a month ago. Only received two editted photos and did the rest myself. I am in no way a retoucher, so I am asking for critique of my skills in modeling alone. Looking for advice and constructive criticism only please. smile
Thanks
-Luna

Jan 25 13 11:59 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9248

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130103/16/50e6251e091ba_m.jpg
This I would call an over edit
Looks like you lost the pearl necklace

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130122/19/50ff5d7622adc_m.jpg
Raise chin
You should be able to pose your arms so they do not add to the apparent size of your mid section

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/12/50f46815e258a_m.jpg
You look like you have a cold and can not breathe through your nose

For me you have a nice look, if you were to shoot with some photographers that normally work with new models I bet you could create some awesome images.

Jan 26 13 11:38 am Link

Photographer

Mike Williams Photo

Posts: 125

Chattanooga, Tennessee, US

I agree. You are a pretty girl, lots of potential. This particular photographer did not do you justice. Good start though. Keep trying!

Jan 26 13 06:23 pm Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 1927

Oak Ridge, Tennessee, US

Yeah, 'pretty gal. 'over-retouch, but artsy-OK.  Hopefully that won't happen to you too often.

Jan 26 13 10:54 pm Link

Photographer

JOEL McDONALD

Posts: 608

Portland, Oregon, US

Do a browse search for better MM TF photogs in your area that will know how to work with YOUR strengths - EYES and FACE.

Jan 27 13 11:01 am Link