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Makeup Artist

sdmakeupartistry

Posts: 12

Hicksville, New York, US

tell me what yours are from my port!  I just updated my portfolio and nixed some shots that I really thought weren't helpful.  I would love to hear other people's opinions. (: Any other constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!

Jan 27 13 08:03 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4586

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Favourite:
I like the dark eye makeup and the model's expression.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd95724d6_m.jpg

Least favourite.  Skin tones on face look out of whack compared to her arms and the hair light is too bright and draws attention away from her face
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102ff493568a_m.jpg

Jan 27 13 10:54 am Link

Makeup Artist

sdmakeupartistry

Posts: 12

Hicksville, New York, US

David Kirk wrote:
Favourite:
I like the dark eye makeup and the model's expression.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd95724d6_m.jpg

Least favourite.  Skin tones on face look out of whack compared to her arms and the hair light is too bright and draws attention away from her face
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102ff493568a_m.jpg

Thanks for your response. (:

Of yours, I love this shot. 
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28074514
I love how the model is framed and the overall look of this picture. 

Least favorite would probably be this one.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31185218
The composition isn't really particularly interesting because it's straight on and there's a lot of space on the top.  The model, although she's gorgeous, looks kind of uncomfortable as well.

Overall, great work though.  I had a hard time choosing which ones I liked/didn't like as much. XD

Jan 28 13 10:30 am Link

Model

Nikki Heat

Posts: 84

Novi, Michigan, US

For makeup artistry - lucky #13 is my favorite it really shows your talent well.
Least favorite - the last one in your port.  I don't really see the artistry here. IMHO

Jan 28 13 02:40 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2034

Chicago, Illinois, US

Favorite
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd95724d6_m.jpg

Least fave

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102ff7a7bacb_m.jpg

Jan 28 13 02:51 pm Link

Photographer

click snap

Posts: 468

ACE, Texas, US

My favorite
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31427155

It was a lot harder to pick my least favorite.  They are all good to me.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31427142

Jan 28 13 03:00 pm Link

Jan 28 13 03:01 pm Link

Photographer

zssphotography

Posts: 56

UPPER DARBY, Pennsylvania, US

favorite:http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd6d7a876_m.jpgbeautiful lighting and colors and a great composition!

least favorite:http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd051009c_m.jpgdont really like the expression the llama is giving and lighting could be more interesting

Jan 28 13 07:44 pm Link

Model

Ceci L

Posts: 235

Villena, Valencia, Spain

Favorite, Just beautiful:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102fd6d7a876_m.jpg


Least fav:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130125/13/5102ff7a7bacb_m.jpg
The facial expression

Jan 29 13 11:40 am Link