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Photographer

FritzTheWonderMutt

Posts: 26

San Marcos, California, US

I have updated my pics and would like some feedback on what's working and what's not. Please be specific if you can about lighting, posing, etc.
Thanks.

Jan 28 13 06:23 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8828

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/18/51009e25c9c7d_m.jpg
I like this one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/18/51009d689005d_m.jpg
So close
You have trees growing out of her head
Raise chin a bit
Aim eyes where nose is pointed [Right now the whites of the eyes are aimed at camera lens]

Jan 28 13 08:23 am Link

Photographer

FritzTheWonderMutt

Posts: 26

San Marcos, California, US

Thanks, that helps. Anyone else?

Jan 29 13 07:09 am Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5210

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

The bottom line doesn't work for me - too much landscape not enough model.

Jan 29 13 07:14 am Link