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Eric Molinar Photo

Posts: 11

Tempe, Arizona, US

I have some older stuff on my site.  I could do some updating, but I like to know if I should ditch some of the pictures and I guess what ones are the strongest.

Thanks for the input!

Jan 28 13 11:39 am Link

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The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

One I'd think about ditching is:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121006/09/507057f1c8cb6_m.jpg

It's not really a 'model' image. You have a busy background, and in the thumbnail the model essentially disappears amid the clutter. The guitar hides a lot of her figure and you can't see much of her face.

Just my opinion.

Feb 04 13 05:49 pm Link

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Lee_Photography

Posts: 8841

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Photos that could disappear
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121106/15/50999763b18bb_m.jpg
Full eye please

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/13/51102e24334cd_m.jpg
Lower models chin

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121006/09/507057f1c8cb6_m.jpg
Not the most flattering of knee poses

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110412/21/4da524c6e416f_m.jpg
Loose the border, show models right hand

Now the good stuff
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110329/17/4d927938f1008_m.jpg
Whiten teeth and whites of eyes

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110329/17/4d92795722d9a_m.jpg
Less sky, Photoshop out barbeque grill

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110504/21/4dc2255f20eea_m.jpg
Nice job with this one

Feb 05 13 04:59 am Link