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Photographer

byx

Posts: 2

Braşov, Braşov, Romania

Hello, I’m new here and I definitely need some critique so please tell me what you don’t like and what I must improve.
Cheers,
byx

Jan 31 13 11:09 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 8841

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/51095a79cd507_m.jpg
Composition
Would rather have the space in front of model then behind, give her some place to move into

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/510959ec6f618_m.jpg
Nice
Would like sharper eyes, hair under more control

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/5109592dc26ee_m.jpg
Half of models right eye is in shadow
Due to lighting the bags under the models eyes are highlighted

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/51095bec9f28c_m.jpg
Again would rather see space in front of model
Bottom right corner of photo, Photoshop out dark area or crop off
Lighting bit harsh on model

Jan 31 13 12:10 pm Link

Photographer

byx

Posts: 2

Braşov, Braşov, Romania

Thanks for your answer and especially for commenting some of my images in particular.
I really appreciate this kind of comments, it’s exactly what I was expecting for.
Have a great day,

byx

Feb 01 13 03:39 am Link