Forums > Critique > Creepy Good? Or Creepy Bad..

Model

Avalon Fell

Posts: 75

Rowland Heights, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510ac9487639a_m.jpg

What do you think of this photo? Do you think it does anything good for my portfolio or should I toss it?

Thanks smile

Jan 31 13 11:45 am Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510ac9487639a_m.jpg

What do you think of this photo? Do you think it does anything good for my portfolio?

Thanks smile

It doesn't come off creepy to me. Just merely awkward, like you're cringing like a little kid would in a school portrait. I think you have much better work.

Jan 31 13 11:46 am Link

Photographer

JOEL McDONALD

Posts: 608

Portland, Oregon, US

whoa!

Maybe without the smile?

Jan 31 13 11:48 am Link

Model

Avalon Fell

Posts: 75

Rowland Heights, California, US

Awesome thanks! PHEW time to delete lol

Jan 31 13 11:49 am Link

Model

Avalon Fell

Posts: 75

Rowland Heights, California, US

I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

Jan 31 13 11:54 am Link

Photographer

Toto Photo

Posts: 2791

Belmont, California, US

I like this second one.

Jan 31 13 11:55 am Link

Photographer

JOEL McDONALD

Posts: 608

Portland, Oregon, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

Very macabre, very cool. I like it.

Jan 31 13 11:58 am Link

Model

yumedream

Posts: 46

Atascadero, California, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

Like this one a lot! The first one... agree with the awkward

Jan 31 13 11:58 am Link

Photographer

H A Z E

Posts: 82

London, England, United Kingdom

prefer the second one smile

Jan 31 13 01:45 pm Link

Model

T A Y L O R

Posts: 2977

Austin, Texas, US

Definitely prefer the second one. Your pose is fantastic!

Jan 31 13 01:48 pm Link

Photographer

Evan Hiltunen

Posts: 3249

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Second one definitely works. First one, no.

Jan 31 13 01:55 pm Link

Photographer

ForeverFotos

Posts: 6644

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

This is a definite keeper.

Jan 31 13 02:01 pm Link

Photographer

Daeda1us

Posts: 1067

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

Yep, loving this one!

Jan 31 13 02:43 pm Link

Photographer

Tangent Pictures

Posts: 43

Montpellier, Languedoc-Roussillon, France

#1 is terrible, sorry. While #2 is really good, technically and beyond. No hesitation there, to me smile

Jan 31 13 03:30 pm Link

Artist/Painter

MainePaintah

Posts: 1778

Saco, Maine, US

That 1st photo scared the bejeebees out of me! I like the rest of your port though!

Jan 31 13 03:35 pm Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 276

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

Go for the 2nd one. This is really special.

Keep the 1st one privately as "Making of" to have something to smile, but not in your portfolio

:-)

Jan 31 13 03:41 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Yes to the second one!

Jan 31 13 03:44 pm Link

Model

Kelleth

Posts: 2528

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Prefer second. First, not at all.

Jan 31 13 05:27 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

Avalon Fell wrote:
I want a photo from this set but I dont know what I think about this one either hmm
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130131/11/510acba99d4cd_m.jpg

love this shot!!

Jan 31 13 05:28 pm Link

Model

Anna Kl

Posts: 189

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

second one looks great! first one is .......no haha

Jan 31 13 06:51 pm Link

Photographer

Mario Guarneros

Posts: 49

Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates

Great make up, great concept and posing. I am not sure about the editing/post. The red eye shadows are unreal though, you rocked the theme in the second one. Is the original file any sharper?

Jan 31 13 07:02 pm Link

Model

NicoleNudes

Posts: 3860

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Second one yes, first one no

Jan 31 13 07:04 pm Link