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Photographer

ErNie Fotografie

Posts: 3

Kiel, Schleswig-Holstein, Germany

Give it to me wink ...

Feb 01 13 12:55 pm Link

Photographer

Decay of Memory

Posts: 604

Asheville, North Carolina, US

Here: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31507664 Nice landscape, the clothes seem gratuitous. Same pose, same setting, same model would be better nude.

More generally there's a nice mood to your images, you often achieve a sort of smoky intimacy with your treatment and framing.

Feb 01 13 01:29 pm Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

Not bad... Some things I wouldn't post on MM... Like this one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130201/00/510b82f676eee_m.jpg

Is the image about the model or the landscape? Maybe you were going for a mood... isolation, desolation, or something. Well, it didn't work for me. I just see a tiny model and a hill.

MM is supposed to connect photographers with models, not landscapes. So maybe if you want to post images of tiny models in landscapes, MM is not the best choice. Models want to be the main thing in the image.

Just my opinion.

BTW, I get a 'too yellow' vibe from many of your images.

Feb 01 13 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

Tangent Pictures

Posts: 43

Montpellier, Languedoc-Roussillon, France

Oh I like that. Good photos, plus the added value of character and personal style/creativity (well, not my style but I can certainly appreciate yours). And nice models. My faves are #1, 3 and the beach ones. As previous posters mentionned, not sure about the landscapes, maybe you could get rid of the second one. I'm not sure also about the nudes, you could probably replace one of them at some point, later. As to #9, very pro and well lit, though a tad conventional compared with others. But I guess you need to keep showing at least one of that kind, just to be on the safe side... smile

Feb 01 13 09:09 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

welcome.  Pretty good except I think pics 3&4 seem out of place

Feb 01 13 10:30 pm Link