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Photographer

Tobiwaun

Posts: 20

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I am just starting out on MM as a photographer and am looking for feedback on my profile and portfolio.

Feb 02 13 09:05 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 2971

Walnut Creek, California, US

Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

But just one worthless opinion.  smile

Feb 02 13 09:41 am Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

You have a very nice diverse portfolio. Obviously well seasoned.

I agree the first three are weaker than the rest

Feb 02 13 09:41 am Link

Photographer

Tangent Pictures

Posts: 43

Montpellier, Languedoc-Roussillon, France

As I feel it, if youd could do more along that line:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/14/50e9f4bfc90ae_m.jpg
(my fave), perhaps with a tad more subdued/discrete backgounds, that'd be great! smile

Feb 02 13 09:49 am Link

Photographer

Tobiwaun

Posts: 20

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

But just one worthless opinion.  smile

Thanks. I appreciate the feedback!

Feb 02 13 12:43 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Kerrek

Posts: 1425

Orlando, Florida, US

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

Yeah, the top 3 don't add anything to the portfolio. Maybe keep the first, if you're really looking to start shooting more of that genre, but otherwise lose all 3. Apart from that, some good stuff in there. smile

Feb 02 13 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

Tobiwaun

Posts: 20

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I removed two of the three and changed the Avatar!

Feb 03 13 07:22 pm Link

Model

Jane Smith Angel

Posts: 24

Lafayette, Louisiana, US

I really like your style!

Feb 03 13 07:25 pm Link