Forums > Critique > Would I recommend you based on your top row?

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

ArtsieFartsie Facepaint wrote:
im not a photographer if thats what your judging is based on…
but i curious to what you think mine… smile

I base it on your MM job description.

Yes

Feb 10 13 07:22 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Crows Photography wrote:
Have a look

Yes

Feb 10 13 07:22 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Wander Lost Photo wrote:
I'll play.

No - Working on composition would help. Also, shooting more finished out looks from your models would add to your work as well. I do like the funky tones you play with!

Feb 10 13 07:26 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Expression Unlimited wrote:

Well Josh, I would respect you, looking at YOUR top row, so  ... go for it!

BTW my sister in law is moving this week to your neck of the woods from CA .. do you LOVE Austin  TX?

Britt

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Austin is a very fun place! Lots of weirdness to go around! Ha!!

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No - I do like your first shot, but I feel the camera in the photo does not add to the amazing style. It has a classical feel to it, but then the camera dates it. It also has some great post work on it. Many of your models on the top row are posing in ways that look forced.

Feb 10 13 07:33 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Jackson frontier photos wrote:
I'm in but could you inbox me with the critique?  Thanks

Will do!

Feb 10 13 07:36 am Link

Model

MariaPantellis

Posts: 60

Derby, England, United Kingdom

Me smile

Feb 10 13 07:39 am Link

Photographer

JeanetteNyberg

Posts: 20

Reinsvoll, Oppland, Norway

I could use some tips and feedback. smile I'm looking for help determine which one i should keep and which to remove smile

Feb 10 13 07:40 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

MariaPantellis wrote:
Me smile

No - Try to line up some better photographers.

This one is HOT!!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130209/17/5116fd69bc7ed_m.jpg

Feb 10 13 07:48 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

JeanetteNyberg wrote:
I could use some tips and feedback. smile I'm looking for help determine which one i should keep and which to remove smile

No - Pull this one up.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121001/05/5069904638382_m.jpg

Crop this one a bit tighter and move it up.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30022699 18+


This one is in to close on her. It would help this model to have more negative space in her head shot due to her having a round face. Perhaps a 3/4 view of the face would help too.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121231/12/50e1ef1f2341d_m.jpg

Feb 10 13 07:53 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Bump

Feb 11 13 08:24 am Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 276

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

yes!!

Feb 11 13 09:16 am Link

Model

TinaKe

Posts: 150

Boston, Massachusetts, US

me?

Feb 11 13 01:59 pm Link

Model

Kristin Howell

Posts: 101

Morehead, Kentucky, US

I'd like to know smile

Feb 11 13 02:55 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Flash-Joerg wrote:
yes!!

Move these two up and YES!!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121106/12/509972b94ccbf_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30835809 18+

Feb 11 13 04:03 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

TinaKe wrote:
me?

Yes

Feb 11 13 04:05 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Kristin Howell wrote:
I'd like to know smile

2 3 4 are very similar...

Shuffle it up and add this one then a yes!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/10/50d4a4772e869_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 04:11 pm Link

Model

Kate Conner

Posts: 5

Fort Wayne, Indiana, US

Me?

Feb 11 13 05:26 pm Link

Model

Sylph Sia

Posts: 34

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Sure? smile

Feb 11 13 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Kate Conner wrote:
Me?

No - Line up some more pro work like this and YES.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/12/5117fdc0edba5_m.jpg

Feb 11 13 07:45 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Sylph Sia wrote:
Sure? smile

YES

Feb 11 13 07:45 pm Link

Model

Tiffiney C

Posts: 570

Los Angeles, California, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Yes!! Very sexy work up top!

Thank you smile

Feb 11 13 07:52 pm Link

Model

s u r r e a l

Posts: 46

Idaho Falls, Idaho, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:
No - More like the 2nd one would help.

I've rearranged my top row, how about now? And if it's still no, what could I use to make it a yes? :p

Feb 11 13 08:35 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

s u r r e a l wrote:

I've rearranged my top row, how about now? And if it's still no, what could I use to make it a yes? :p

Still a no - I like 1, 3, and 4. However, if you lined up some work with better photographers it would help you out. The quality and comp on many of them is not very strong. Also... if you build a more finished out look for your shoots it will help you look more professional. Sorry... I know that might not have been what you were looking for, but I want to give you as much honest guidance as possible.

Feb 11 13 08:56 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Bump

Feb 13 13 04:08 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Bump x 2 - HA!!

Feb 13 13 10:10 pm Link

Model

Bethany Kay Maternity

Posts: 16

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

How about my top row?

Feb 14 13 08:01 am Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Bethany Kay Maternity wrote:
How about my top row?

Move these two up and yes!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/09/510ff4941ea6f_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/13/511962342fee1_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 10:06 am Link

Retoucher

MSL Retouch

Posts: 244

Miami, Florida, US

oops i had already asked =]

Jan 21 14 01:44 pm Link

Model

Celine Sophia

Posts: 503

Santa Barbara, California, US

Pick me! Pick me!!

Jan 21 14 01:47 pm Link

Photographer

Thatcher Photography

Posts: 1033

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Celine Sophia wrote:
Pick me! Pick me!!

Yes! I would move the 2nd shot down and promote the 4th shot though!

This one should be up there too!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/12/519a7c31d0d7a_m.jpg

Jan 21 14 03:23 pm Link

Model

Danielle Reid

Posts: 4389

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

would you?

Jan 21 14 03:27 pm Link

guide forum

Model

Rockabella

Posts: 588

New York, New York, US

Alright, what's the verdict?

Jan 21 14 03:59 pm Link

Model

May_Bee

Posts: 222

Basel, Basel-Town, Switzerland

me? smile

Jan 21 14 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Modstudios

Posts: 1158

Beavercreek, Ohio, US

Go

Jan 21 14 04:11 pm Link

Photographer

Timothy Bell

Posts: 402

North Richland Hills, Texas, US

Interested

Jan 21 14 04:40 pm Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 27267

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Interested

Jan 21 14 05:19 pm Link

Photographer

ShoxXxZ

Posts: 19

Denver, Colorado, US

I dont have a normal style so I assume no but what the heck please critique me.

Jan 21 14 06:03 pm Link

Photographer

Rik Williams

Posts: 3507

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Thatcher Photography wrote:
I will give a simple yes or no.

If you get a no, I will try to toss out a tip that might help you out.

Keep in mind this is not intended to hurt anyone's feelings!

Feel free to give me a yes or no as well.

Let's have some fun!

Thanks,

Josh Thatcher

Cool

Jan 21 14 08:56 pm Link

Model

Jen B

Posts: 3187

Hopkinsville, Kentucky, US

This is back in action?

Your top row? Heck yes.

Mine?
Jen

Jan 21 14 09:20 pm Link

Model

Skyler Bleu

Posts: 522

Albany, Oregon, US

sure hit me!

Jan 23 14 06:01 pm Link