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Model

Ashlyn Orion

Posts: 35

Ashland, Oregon, US

1-2 pics that are dragging down the quality of my port .. GO!

Feb 03 13 04:51 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

Nix:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25412586
The blood doesn't make sense in this image. Where did you get it? Why are you licking it?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31249887
The pose is just awkward. And the angle.

Feb 03 13 04:55 pm Link

Model

Ashlyn Orion

Posts: 35

Ashland, Oregon, US

Samantha Emme wrote:
Nix:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25412586
The blood doesn't make sense in this image. Where did you get it? Why are you licking it?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31249887
The pose is just awkward. And the angle.

#1, gone!
#2, I didnt like this image either! Shouldve trusted my instinct vs photogs!
Good call.

Feb 03 13 04:58 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32397

Poulsbo, Washington, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130104/21/50e7b8b5efc91_m.jpg
Peekaboo of the face isn't enough.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121110/22/509f4a1f6d5a2_m.jpg
Image is too dark, face is hidden and you're too obscured by flowing cloth.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25215200 That really should be tagged M for nipples.
You're far too obscured in this image for it to be useful for a model's portfolio.

Feb 03 13 07:00 pm Link