Forums > Critique > Fun and Games > What do you think of my new updated portfolio?

Model

Kelly Ann Carter

Posts: 93

Hollywood, Florida, US

feel free to be honest but nice. No nasty rude comments!

Feb 03 13 09:17 pm Link

Photographer

Martin Coombes

Posts: 116

Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany

Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
feel free to be honest but nice. No nasty rude comments!

Very nice images, but somehow you don't look relaxed.

Maybe find a talented photographer who you can get some sort of connection with.

But you look great smile

Feb 03 13 11:22 pm Link

Photographer

paragonfl

Posts: 293

Saint Petersburg, Florida, US

You have a nice look but need work on posing. The 4th pic in the 2 piece by the pool is on example of a poor pose - you are facing the camera with a blah look-

turn your hips at an angle, pull your shoulders back - raise your head and look at... something with a smile on your face. IMHO

May 28 13 08:24 am Link