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Model

Titania Forza

Posts: 74

Monte Carlo, Monte Carlo, Monaco

I would very much appreciate some thoughts or tips on how I may improve. Thanks!

Feb 04 13 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

Mario Guarneros

Posts: 49

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

You seem to be aiming towards fitness, have you considered doing a session for a fitness magazine/photographer?

Try and book a proper studio session with a pro MUA and get the essentials out of the way, that will get you some bookings or at the very least will get your foot in the door for castings and tests.

Find which style/genre you would like to get jobs on, gather a series of sample images on those genres and start building up your port with photographers and MUA's that specialise in the concepts you chose.

If you would like to shoot something other than fitness try and work on shaping your body to the genre of choice, based on the images on your port I'd say you are in the middle, not extremely into fitness but not really into the "curves" side.

I hope all that makes sense, work hard and good luck! smile

Feb 04 13 06:28 pm Link

Model

Titania Forza

Posts: 74

Monte Carlo, Monte Carlo, Monaco

Thank you. yes, it makes perfect sense and great advice. I think you're right. I would like to get more into fitness so... workout time!

Feb 04 13 09:07 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9286

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/17/51105f4818a28_m.jpg
Your arms look too stiff

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/16/511059794393b_m.jpg
This pose works for you, but I want to see you bigger in the photo
[Nice lamp, but want to see you the model]

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121008/18/5073828220cfc_m.jpg
Cool look, but seems like you have too much back showing which is distracting from your beautiful face

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110628/08/4e09f38ab0168_m.jpg
Still my favorite from your portfolio

Agree with commercial and fitness

Feb 05 13 04:50 am Link