Forums > Critique > I pick your best (if I can find it)

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Rousing Images wrote:
I would love the feedback.

You're making images that are flirting with the edges to porn. That's not without charm but to be really cool they have to be technically better (better exposed e.g.) and more appering to be purposely that way. The way you're on (assuming what I described is your goal) is right however.

Feb 13 13 03:38 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Natallia Nia wrote:
i just start.what will  you say about me?

You have 3 images I like / really like, this is my fav:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130213/23/511c962bb22af_m.jpg

It's ok you also have a few images that show your body + figure, but the other ones I would ditch. Seriously drags down your port. Better to have a few great ones than many but a lot that suck.

Feb 14 13 03:07 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Rick Krueger NJ wrote:
Thanks for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated. To your point, the text is really the part that is failing... Luckily, the two you picked are among the newer shots in my port, so I think I'm moving in the right direction.

I am interested in which shots you feel are "cheap" and was wondering if you might explain a bit more... Not sure I fully grasp your meaning.

Thanks!

Sorry, bad translation.
In english you would say "cheesy" I guess.
This is one that especially avoked that comment:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121122/07/50ae444c52cb8_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 03:09 pm Link

Model

Maria Susanti

Posts: 546

Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia

me please

Feb 14 13 03:09 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

AshleyJames Photography wrote:
Pick me =]

Sorry, I don't like any. And you don't have much. The first model looks pretty ugly especially with that styling, the second one is just very stiff and the whole scene looks staged (in a bad way). The lighting, the framing - not good at all.

Feb 14 13 03:12 pm Link

Digital Artist

ShuttingDown

Posts: 68

Crystal Lake, Illinois, US

I don't have much, but would be very curious on your take on virtual models.

Feb 14 13 03:21 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Big A-Larger Than Life wrote:
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!  big_smile

Your port is a mess.
I see A LOT of photos you usually see on a facebook page, but they have no place in a model's portfolio.
And there are way too many photos altogether.
I really like your short hair, slender figure and open and joyful personality I see in a few of your pics. But I could not find a single image that takes all that and turns it into a great picture.
Really a shame, I see a ton of wasted potential there. :-(

Feb 15 13 09:28 am Link

Photographer

Byron Chua

Posts: 231

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

smile

Feb 15 13 09:33 am Link

Photographer

DRaskin Photography

Posts: 164

Sacramento, California, US

If you have time, please take a look at my port and let me know what you think. Thanks.

Feb 15 13 09:43 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Maria Susanti wrote:
me please

Nice port.
Your posing looks often quiet stiff and you do that "hand-above-shoulders"-thing too much, but then again I don't know nothing about the indonesian market. wink
However, i would like to see more drama and a little less bright, colorful plain images.
That's why I prefer this:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/08/4fec7b1f30c86_m.jpg

Feb 15 13 09:43 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

RickyArt wrote:
I don't have much, but would be very curious on your take on virtual models.

I'm sorry, but I don't know how to critique that. :-(

Feb 15 13 10:02 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Byron Chua wrote:
smile

Really nice work, I especially like the first row.
Keep that going.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120702/19/4ff25b5030074_m.jpg

Feb 15 13 12:19 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

DRaskin Photography wrote:
If you have time, please take a look at my port and let me know what you think. Thanks.

Nice, but not exceptional. Try other models/poses, other lighting and/or other themes than just cars&girls to get something more exciting.

Feb 15 13 12:23 pm Link

Photographer

Darling photo

Posts: 1

Olympia, Washington, US

me please.

Feb 15 13 12:35 pm Link

Model

Kelly Ann Carter

Posts: 93

Hollywood, Florida, US

Me?

Feb 15 13 04:40 pm Link

Photographer

Brosius Photographics

Posts: 1491

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Can you find anything decent in my portfolio?

Feb 15 13 05:16 pm Link

Model

Foxy Tokala

Posts: 257

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Please do me!  I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best!  Thank you

Feb 15 13 05:27 pm Link

Photographer

Kallea

Posts: 77

Knoxville, Tennessee, US

Yes please! smile

Feb 15 13 05:28 pm Link

Photographer

Alexander's Fine Art

Posts: 12739

Reading, Pennsylvania, US

I would love your input....  I think.  smile

Feb 15 13 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

gpmcguire

Posts: 1169

Brooklyn, New York, US

I dare you to find it. 








I might regret that in the morning.

Feb 15 13 05:35 pm Link

Model

Laurel Lee

Posts: 53

London, England, United Kingdom

try me

Feb 16 13 03:21 am Link

Model

Tia Harris

Posts: 17

Eivissa, Balearic Islands, Spain

Im a newbie so would really appreciate the feedback. stunning portfolio by the way smile

Feb 16 13 06:46 am Link

Photographer

Jhono Bashian

Posts: 2432

Cleveland, Ohio, US

try to find it!

Feb 16 13 06:54 am Link

Model

Rayne Tupelo

Posts: 21

Louisa, Virginia, US

I would love a critique! :-)

Feb 16 13 08:28 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

My Darling wrote:
me please.

This is your best series (yet):

18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31439296

The other ones in your port are mostly more like portrait snapshots.

Feb 17 13 08:41 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Sorry...double post.

Feb 17 13 08:42 am Link

Photographer

Scott Sullivan Photo

Posts: 1175

Royal Oak, Michigan, US

Interested.

Feb 17 13 09:01 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Your avi may be the best in yur port now.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/18/50ea302959a1c_m.jpg

Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
Me?

You've got some nice, simple images. I'd like to see something more sophisticated in addition though.
The posing in your swimwear-images does not look very good.
You claim a lot in your profile text, your port isn't showing enough prove right now IMHO.

Feb 17 13 09:10 am Link

Photographer

PicturePerfectImage

Posts: 80

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Are you still working on this? I would love to hear your comments..

Feb 17 13 09:16 am Link

Photographer

sensual light studios

Posts: 45

Hollywood, Florida, US

OK

Feb 17 13 04:19 pm Link

Model

Shirley Song

Posts: 22

Columbia, South Carolina, US

Curious.

Feb 17 13 04:20 pm Link

Photographer

Folly Photographe

Posts: 61

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

If your still going up !

Feb 17 13 10:29 pm Link

Model

PigeonFoo

Posts: 284

Syracuse, New York, US

Could you offer me your opinion?

Feb 17 13 10:42 pm Link

Photographer

Visual Creations LV

Posts: 72

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

ok i'll bite

Feb 17 13 10:53 pm Link

Photographer

Dan Brady

Posts: 610

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

Yes please smile

Feb 18 13 06:23 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Brosius Photographics wrote:
Can you find anything decent in my portfolio?

Nice port, but maybe a bit much.

Would like a bit less flare & orange, but besides this is my fav:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/19/4fed0c23eeeb3_m.jpg

Feb 18 13 11:40 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Foxy Tokala wrote:
Please do me!  I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best!  Thank you

I'm not impressed by your port. Can't find one I really like, sorry.

Feb 18 13 11:54 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

Salle de Soleil wrote:
Yes please! smile

I think you need some more variety, looks like you only show about 3 shots. Show more and sort some out then.

Feb 18 13 12:00 pm Link

Clothing Designer

Chainmaille Treasures

Posts: 828

Hermitage, Tennessee, US

i'll give it a try

Feb 18 13 12:02 pm Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 656

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

EA Photographics wrote:
I would love your input....  I think.  smile

Your style mostly does not quiet meet my taste but you show some nice pictures.

This is my fav:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060701/21/44a72a9d5e030_m.jpg

Feb 18 13 12:05 pm Link