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Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

reviews of your port. They will be quick and honest. No BS.....and as long as I cannot sleep.......

Interested?

Feb 10 13 01:28 am Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

yesss

Feb 10 13 01:38 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

jesse paulk wrote:
yesss

Very interesting use of lighting, coloring, angles and POV. I like your creativity and actually listed this

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/18/5115b00edc310.jpg

Feb 10 13 01:45 am Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

thanks for the list, but stuff will be taken down in a day or two. im kind of adrift atm.

Feb 10 13 01:52 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

jesse paulk wrote:
thanks for the list, but stuff will be taken down in a day or two. im kind of adrift atm.

you putting up new or different stuff?

Feb 10 13 01:56 am Link

Photographer

jesse paulk

Posts: 3712

Phoenix, Arizona, US

different, not sure if there will be any new stuff...

Feb 10 13 02:01 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

jesse paulk wrote:
different, not sure if there will be any new stuff...

OK, I will be watching. I like your work

Feb 10 13 02:04 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4642

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Sure, I'd like your feedback please.

Feb 10 13 02:13 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

David Kirk wrote:
Sure, I'd like your feedback please.

You have fabulous control of your lighting and editing. Good quality. But most of the shots look very similar. Is that what you are attempting? Just seems with your quality you can do so much more.........and listed this. I love wonderful eyes!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100402/07/4bb602f2c4524.jpg

Feb 10 13 02:19 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4642

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Peach Jones wrote:

You have fabulous control of your lighting and editing. Good quality. But most of the shots look very similar. Is that what you are attempting? Just seems with your quality you can do so much more.........and listed this. I love wonderful eyes!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100402/07/4bb602f2c4524.jpg

thanks for the feedback.  My main interest is in portraiture so I guess my focus is pretty narrow, but even then I would hope my portfolio does not come across as too self-similar.  I guess I need to work on that.  Thanks!

Feb 10 13 02:42 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

interested

Feb 10 13 04:35 am Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9224

Brooklyn, New York, US

Yes

Feb 10 13 05:03 am Link

Photographer

Decay of Memory

Posts: 627

Asheville, North Carolina, US

Well, on one hand I sort of hope you've gotten to sleep by now...

Feb 10 13 05:22 am Link

Model

Maria Susanti

Posts: 546

Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia

im in

Feb 10 13 05:30 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 208

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Yes Please Sir

Feb 10 13 06:18 am Link

Model

Ceci L

Posts: 235

Villena, Valencia, Spain

I'm in

Feb 10 13 06:55 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

HEATHER 19 wrote:
interested

Perfect figure
love your eyes!
huge potential

don't underachieve!!

Feb 10 13 07:04 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jeff Fiore wrote:
Yes

You know I LOVE your work Jeff!

Why?:
Great creativity
not boring
inspiration
wish I had balls as big as yours  ;-)

Feb 10 13 07:05 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Decay of Memory wrote:
Well, on one hand I sort of hope you've gotten to sleep by now...

a little bit......but back up

I like that you think outside the box. That is good. Even though most of your work isn't for my taste, don't let that stop you by any means. You may create the next masterpiece!

Feb 10 13 07:07 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Maria Susanti wrote:
im in

innocent looking
stoic
get something dramatically different
be bold!

Feb 10 13 07:07 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Arya-Tara wrote:
Yes Please Sir

very pretty
lovely body
you are starting to learn you have great potential as an art nude model, but not quite there yet.
Keep going.......and cut about 25% off your port

Feb 10 13 07:09 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Ceci L wrote:
I'm in

I like what I see, but do something different. A lot different. You still need that WOW shot to define your port!

good luck!!!!!!!

Feb 10 13 07:10 am Link

Photographer

MiGel

Posts: 664

Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany

I would really like to hear.

Feb 10 13 07:54 am Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2570

Los Angeles, California, US

Go ahead, and yes, I know I have too many photos. smile

Feb 10 13 10:45 am Link

Model

MartaBrixton

Posts: 1007

London, England, United Kingdom

If you are still up ... smile

Feb 10 13 10:53 am Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

Of course, let's go!

Feb 10 13 11:13 am Link

Model

Ceci L

Posts: 235

Villena, Valencia, Spain

Peach Jones wrote:

I like what I see, but do something different. A lot different. You still need that WOW shot to define your port!

good luck!!!!!!!

Thank you! Wishing to have that killer shoot soon^^

Feb 10 13 12:02 pm Link

Model

Magic Forests

Posts: 530

New York, New York, US

I'm just starting out so there isn't much variety, but I'd love some feedback please. smile

Feb 10 13 12:10 pm Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9224

Brooklyn, New York, US

Peach Jones wrote:

You know I LOVE your work Jeff!

Why?:
Great creativity
not boring
inspiration
wish I had balls as big as yours  ;-)

Thank you!
And I don't have balls, my ex got them in the divorce...

Feb 10 13 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

MiGel wrote:
I would really like to hear.

Your work is that which raises the bar for everyone else. I particularly like how you creatively use the slender legs as angles to lead into your main subject or even help break up the artwork. Bravo!!

Feb 11 13 08:39 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Go ahead, and yes, I know I have too many photos. smile

I like that you think outside the box. I also hope to do work like yours someday. Only 2 things are my beef:

Too many photos........which you know

The sheer # of shots starts to make them all kinda look the same. So either reduce the # of photos or start getting dramatically different shots from what you are getting. Still, I will be back for ideas and inspiration

Feb 11 13 08:42 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

MartaBrixton wrote:
If you are still up ... smile

You are the rare bread of model that has the ability to make every shot a WOW shot. With your beauty, eyes and .......um.......very healthy chest........almost every work can make us look twice. I only wish I could see a true art nude shoot with you, because I sincerely believe your body could be "show worthy". And this is one of my B/W favs on MM

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120518/08/4fb66fef2d0f2.jpg

Feb 11 13 08:45 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
Of course, let's go!

I still love your beauty and body and versatility! This is one of my new favs:

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31402804

the only problem with your port is that you don't have shots of yourself that I could take   ;-)

thanks for stopping by!!

Feb 11 13 08:48 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6686

Champaign, Illinois, US

Sylvie Rose wrote:
I'm just starting out so there isn't much variety, but I'd love some feedback please. smile

Fabulous legs, behind and tummy. Use them and have fun getting more and better shots!

Feb 11 13 08:49 pm Link

Photographer

Francisco Castro

Posts: 1893

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

Peach Jones wrote:
reviews of your port. They will be quick and honest. No BS.....and as long as I cannot sleep.......

Interested?

Can't sleep either. Go for it.

Feb 11 13 09:33 pm Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

Peach Jones wrote:

I still love your beauty and body and versatility! This is one of my new favs:

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p ic/31402804

the only problem with your port is that you don't have shots of yourself that I could take   ;-)

thanks for stopping by!!

I woul love to have this shots... maybe...

Feb 12 13 02:32 am Link

Photographer

Bradley Hall

Posts: 47

Nitro, West Virginia, US

sure im in

Feb 12 13 02:42 am Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 278

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

Yes, do you still have stamina :-). I will also look at yours

Feb 12 13 05:17 am Link

Photographer

The Dark Side

Posts: 309

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Still awake??

Feb 12 13 05:59 am Link

Model

C A K E M I X

Posts: 873

Louth, England, United Kingdom

need it!

Feb 12 13 06:05 am Link