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Photographer

Gabriele Ardemagni Foto

Posts: 7

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

http://ardemagnigabriele.wix.com/hard-1

here my new site

i hope to receive many critics or suggestion to do the best

have a good light !!!

Feb 22 13 04:03 am Link

Photographer

Velvet Paper Photo

Posts: 468

Lexington, Kentucky, US

Hi.  It's a nice website, but I think the "Home" page has too much going on with it.  It's hard for my eyes to focus on one thing.
The "Port" section just seems redundant & doesn't need to be there when you have "portrait" "fashion" "glamour" & "landscape."
You do very nice work, you should have your own domain.  Go ahead & upgrade to wix's premium package, it's well worth it.

Feb 22 13 04:28 am Link

Photographer

Rick Dupuis Photography

Posts: 6822

Truro, Nova Scotia, Canada

There is too much going on. You're good at your job so let that speak for itself. And that free website banner at the bottom is bad. For the cost (I just registered mine for $11) its well worth it professionally to have your own domain.

Feb 22 13 04:33 am Link

Photographer

Gabriele Ardemagni Foto

Posts: 7

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

Velvet Paper Photo wrote:
Hi.  It's a nice website, but I think the "Home" page has too much going on with it.  It's hard for my eyes to focus on one thing.
The "Port" section just seems redundant & doesn't need to be there when you have "portrait" "fashion" "glamour" & "landscape."
You do very nice work, you should have your own domain.  Go ahead & upgrade to wix's premium package, it's well worth it.

Ty smile

I think to reduce the home page at only 3 or 4 section

For the domain yes it's the next step to do wink

Feb 22 13 06:02 am Link

Photographer

Gabriele Ardemagni Foto

Posts: 7

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

Rick Dupuis Photography wrote:
There is too much going on. You're good at your job so let that speak for itself. And that free website banner at the bottom is bad. For the cost (I just registered mine for $11) its well worth it professionally to have your own domain.

TY smile

Yes i think to reduce at only 3 or 4 section my homep. Then next step register a domain big_smile

Feb 22 13 06:03 am Link

Photographer

Gabriele Ardemagni Foto

Posts: 7

Milan, Lombardy, Italy

looking for modified site please big_smile

http://ardemagnigabriele.wix.com/hard-1

Feb 26 13 09:33 am Link