Out of the two images I have titled 'colour' which do you believe adds the most to my portfolio? Choose one over the other or keep both?
Here's a cropped side by side comparison but you really see it better in the full photos.
Feb 25 13 03:00 am Link
I kind of like them put together like that too .
I love the colour of your skin and hair in the second one (the one on the right), left one is a bit too orangy for my taste... I find left also to be more "cute and sexy" and the right one a bit more fashion so if you just want one I'd say B!
But I'm kind of curious to see how they look like put together like you did here, in the same edit
Feb 25 13 04:04 am Link
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US
Hand is shadowing models right eye
Due to pose right hand is missing
Due to dress selection models form is lost in the material
Eyes centered in sockets would come across better
Move upper left arm away from body so it is not squished
[Bright patters distract away from the model]
Not a fan of location of crop
Lower shoulder toward camera for a longer appearing neck
Due to hand pose fingers look short
Neither photo comes across as having strong expressions
You have a good look just need to bring it out in your photos more
Wish you well
Feb 25 13 07:42 am Link
Washington, District of Columbia, US
While B isnt bad.. It looks like you're an amputee and the crop is off
Feb 25 13 09:31 am Link
Tampa, Florida, US
My eyes don't focus anywhere except the bold patterns of the dress...it's overwhelming the image and makes you secondary in the image. While that pattern might be good for patio furniture, it's not the best choice for an image in a model's portfolio.
Are there b&w images from this shoot? That might be a better solution. But I'm not a fan of either of the poses...they're not particularly flattering. The first image has no shape and the second image looks like you have cramps.
Feb 25 13 09:38 am Link
am I seriously the only one here who likes them ?
wonder what other models think of this picture... or if it's a "modelview vs photographer view" thing
Feb 25 13 01:31 pm Link
Michael Pandolfo wrote:
The shoot was done to feature the clothes haha, I guess that's a win for them and a loss for me.
Feb 25 13 02:57 pm Link
Anna Adrielle wrote:
I really like both of them too! I couldn't choose between which s better, now I'm thinking neither belong in my portfolio
Feb 25 13 02:58 pm Link
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
I say B. I don't like the hand blocking the models face or the post work. I really enjoy B, I even like the awkward crop!
Feb 25 13 02:59 pm Link
Mary Thomson wrote:
nah, a handful of opinions isn't enough . get some more! and make sure to also get some more llama's opinions, sometimes there's an image llamas love but photographers hate or vice versa (not saying that's the case here, but you just won't know until you ask for more opinions).
Feb 25 13 03:00 pm Link
^^ Thank you Anna,
Does anyone else want to give me their opinion
Feb 25 13 05:38 pm Link
Portland, Oregon, US
Anna pretty much said all I would say.
Feb 25 13 09:05 pm Link
STATEN ISLAND, New York, US
I really like B.
Feb 25 13 09:10 pm Link
Seattle, Washington, US
Definitely B- In my opinion, your face, body, hair, and makeup look so much more beautiful than in A. You look about 15 lbs heavier in A, and I'm not a fan of the pink hair.
Feb 25 13 09:11 pm Link
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
Dan K Photography wrote:
Feb 25 13 09:28 pm Link
New York, New York, US
No A is much better looks like your reaching for your amputated fore arm in B and plus A shows among other things a nice butt.
Not crazy about the crop but it still works
Feb 25 13 10:37 pm Link
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Mary Thomson wrote:
B for the fashion look of your expression yet I do like A too.
Feb 25 13 10:49 pm Link
Los Angeles, California, US
I like B. Well done.
Feb 25 13 10:59 pm Link