Forums > Critique > I'd like feedback on this image please

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31792729
I guess just "on this" would have been better than "this image" in the subject?
( I'm the model, not the photographer)

Feb 25 13 02:24 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Terrible pose and facial expression. Won't even get into photographer's faults.
What do you think about it?

Feb 25 13 02:39 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

I actually like both but am very interested in hearing more specifics on your opinion (or I wouldn't have asked)!

Feb 25 13 02:42 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

double posted because I didn't wait long enough for my response to appear...

Feb 25 13 02:49 pm Link

Photographer

Philipe

Posts: 5214

Pomona, California, US

The posing is not good. Why do you have your chin in?
The photo is not good.. What was the photographer thinking?
Over all scratch the idea and and start over with a better photographer.
I can't get into detail because the image makes no sense. Nonsense is fine, no sense is bad..

Feb 25 13 02:53 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I don't get what you're saying in your original post.
And you only linked one photo.

Feb 25 13 02:54 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

Philipe wrote:
The posing is not good. Why do you have your chin in?
The photo is not good.. What was the photographer thinking?
Over all scratch the idea and and start over with a better photographer.
I can't get into detail because the image makes no sense. Nonsense is fine, no sense is bad..

chin in?

Feb 25 13 02:55 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

RachelReilly wrote:
I don't get what you're saying in your original post.
And you only linked one photo.

sorry for confusion, I mean feedback on me in that image

Feb 25 13 02:56 pm Link

Photographer

Sal W Hanna

Posts: 6629

Huntington Beach, California, US

Scrap it. I won't even go into all the problems with this shot. It's beyond repair.

Feb 25 13 02:57 pm Link

Photographer

Philipe

Posts: 5214

Pomona, California, US

Acanthus Tattoos wrote:

chin in?

Yes you chin looks like its going inward. Messing up and ruining your facial expression.. In that pose you chin should be out.

Feb 25 13 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

Philipe

Posts: 5214

Pomona, California, US

Sal W Hanna wrote:
Scrap it. I won't even go into all the problems with this shot. It's beyond repair.

+1

Feb 25 13 03:00 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Acanthus Tattoos wrote:

sorry for confusion, I mean feedback on me in that image

Ohhhh ok!
Yeah I would ditch it though

Feb 25 13 03:01 pm Link

Model

Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 429

Union, New Jersey, US

thank you guys for viewing and giving me your feedback, I typically don't include two similar shots from the same shoot in my profile but uploaded this for comparison to ask whether you think it's better (not to highjack my own thread...)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31793382

Feb 25 13 03:09 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

rubbish

Feb 25 13 09:05 pm Link

Clothing Designer

Julietsdream

Posts: 642

Burbank, California, US

*Sadly, both of these shots should not be in your portfolio, they add nothing to showing how *Beautiful* you Can be..!!..I would take them out..!!

Feb 26 13 11:08 am Link