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Filmmaker

Val LOUIS

Posts: 28

Paris, Île-de-France, France

... my video

I ll be very happy and curious to hear from you about my one minute editing
for our quite well known french brand Longchamp down here :

http://vimeo.com/lowendalfilms/longchamp

We'll show to the client next week so if you have any improvement ideas, by all means do not hesitate,

Thanx,

Val

Feb 26 13 01:59 am Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Val LOUIS wrote:
... my video

I ll be very happy and curious to hear from you about my one minute editing
for our quite well known french brand Longchamp down here :

http://vimeo.com/lowendalfilms/longchamp

We'll show to the client next week so if you have any improvement ideas, by all means do not hesitate,

Thanx,

Val

I think it's engaging for the most part.
A bit repetative and the skin on your models needs to look flawless and it doesn't.
I do like the music

Feb 26 13 05:40 am Link

Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18211

Orlando, Florida, US

I think the product needed to be the main  focus it seems the skin shot was too repetitive. Maybe show the skin a couple of times only and not as much but overall I like the effects.

Feb 26 13 05:43 am Link

Filmmaker

Val LOUIS

Posts: 28

Paris, Île-de-France, France

A-M-P wrote:
I think the product needed to be the main  focus it seems the skin shot was too repetitive. Maybe show the skin a couple of times only and not as much but overall I like the effects.

Thank you for your comment... really helpful...
By the way, you got a very nice port here ;-)

See you,

Val

Feb 26 13 06:27 am Link

Photographer

BlueMoonPics

Posts: 4428

New York, New York, US

A-M-P wrote:
I think the product needed to be the main  focus it seems the skin shot was too repetitive. Maybe show the skin a couple of times only and not as much but overall I like the effects.

I agree we need to see more of the product.  The models are incidental and their skin should be smoother looking.  Otherwise I like the way it's put together.

Feb 26 13 06:41 am Link

Filmmaker

Val LOUIS

Posts: 28

Paris, Île-de-France, France

BlueMoonPics wrote:

I agree we need to see more of the product.  The models are incidental and their skin should be smoother looking.  Otherwise I like the way it's put together.

you are right I need to work on my skin smoothing look but actually the technique is a little harsher than in Photoshop so I have to make that work but thank you very much for your kind word...

Val

Feb 26 13 09:37 am Link