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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
I'm jumping on this wagon  Just lil ole me, if you care for my opinion I will tell your good, bad, and ugly. But first i'd like you to give me idea an idea/inspiration for what you think I should do for my next shoot! Everyone is welcome to play
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That Redhaired Girl
Posts: 1280
Phoenix, Arizona, US
RachelReilly wrote:
I'm jumping on this wagon
Just lil ole me, if you care for my opinion
I will tell your good, bad, and ugly.
But first i'd like you to give me idea an idea/inspiration for what you think I should do for my next shoot!
Everyone is welcome to play Messy! I suggest getting messy!
Whether it be paint sprayed on the models, wading in mud or just going crazy with makeup, I think it would be fun to get grungy with your deep crisp style
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Dark Attitude Photo
Posts: 2829
Rochester, New York, US
I would recommend Motion Strobe light shots in B & W
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TDSImages
Posts: 1017
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
I would recommend adding more color to your port...
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
That Redhaired Girl wrote:
Messy! I suggest getting messy!
Whether it be paint sprayed on the models, wading in mud or just going crazy with makeup, I think it would be fun to get grungy with your deep crisp style Great suggestion, thanks!
It was hard to find a "good" because most of your pictures look amateur, lack depth, poor composition, lighting... So on and so forth
Keep practicing!
Good:[img]http://photos.model mayhem.com/photos/111114/17/4ec1c52a6775b_m.jpg[/img]
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091008/19/4ace9e8250fb5_m.jpg]()
Not good, not interesting, no connection!
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/070905/23/46df88f0b9c8b_m.jpg]()
This is not good .. not executed well and confusing !
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Dark Attitude Photo wrote:
I would recommend Motion Strobe light shots in B & W What do you mean motion strobe?
Over all your black and white looks pretty good.. Work on using pictures where the models don't look like you caught them at a bad moment, crop and composition
Good: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31685940
Simple and not trying too hard!
Ugly :![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130216/12/511feded2ffed_m.jpg]()
Many things wrong with this! Pose, wrinkled background, models lack of face..
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130302/11/51325136b59f1_m.jpg]()
Terrible composition! You caught the model in an unattractive moment! And bad crop
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DScottPhotography
Posts: 141
Bradford, England, United Kingdom
I agree with the messy theme. Love to see you in a Rankin style paint powder shoot. ![https://designyoutrust.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/i1c81.jpg]() Maybe not quite as extreme as that, but you know  And some close ups of that beautiful face.
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Meggera
Posts: 91
South Gate, California, US
TDSImages wrote:
I would recommend adding more color to your port... I agree with that. More color would be nice! Maybe something crazy...like splattering a bunch of paint or something everywhere and have a model frolicking through it.
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JIOPIX
Posts: 1183
Brighton, Ontario, Canada
I think your b&w work is beautiful. Would love to see what you could do with some bodyscapes.
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
TDSImages wrote:
I would recommend adding more color to your port... I am working on adding more color, it's so hard though haha
It's like an addiction converting everything to b&w haha
Good: ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110407/08/4d9dda44e4ef0_m.jpg]()
Now this is interesting! Wish you had more like it!
Bad: ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100919/08/4c962e5a2dbba_m.jpg]()
It's just all too posey and contrived!
Ugly: ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120320/07/4f6893c8a5340_m.jpg]()
Great concept! Not so great execution. I wish it were more polished and I feel as if there is just too much going on!
Bad:
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Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US
I was going to say "more color!" but then I saw that everyone else already said that...but I'll still go with that. Maybe some shots with emphasis on movement similar to your avatar pic but with more color, maybe in the form of crazy stylistic makeup?
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Aly Catt
Posts: 402
Oneonta, New York, US
Photographer
Select Model Studios
Posts: 818
Tempe, Arizona, US
I hate to sound like I'm copying everyone, but I agree with you need more color!
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Foto Priganica
Posts: 50
Leeds, England, United Kingdom
Hola ... I'd say you should try some fashion with male models for a change...B&W!
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
JIOPIX wrote:
I think your b
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JIOPIX
Posts: 1183
Brighton, Ontario, Canada
RachelReilly wrote:
Thank you!
I have this thing about artistic nudes ESP body scapes.. I'm not a fan at all!!
I don't know why though. I suppose I should do it anyway just to say I did right? Haha
Good:http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29912922 18+
I do like this, the colors and her expression looks genuine
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121017/03/507e8ec0998d2_m.jpg]()
Watch your models facial expression.. It's not flattering
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121019/10/50818cda8c086_m.jpg]()
The retouching and cropping .. Just no! Really surprised by your selections. Thank you for taking the time to look
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
JIOPIX wrote:
Really surprised by your selections. Thank you for taking the time to look I was overwhelmed by all the photos in your port but I did the best I could
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
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JIOPIX
Posts: 1183
Brighton, Ontario, Canada
RachelReilly wrote:
I was overwhelmed by all the photos in your port but I did the best I could LOL
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TampaFoto
Posts: 668
Tampa, Florida, US
I would like to know please. I would like to see you do something with water or Milk.
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
JIOPIX wrote:
LOL What's so funny?!
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JIOPIX
Posts: 1183
Brighton, Ontario, Canada
RachelReilly wrote:
What's so funny?! I just appreciated that you tried so hard. Made me chuckle. I didn't mean anything mean by it, if that is the way you took it.
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Haha ok.
I didn't want to pick the obvious
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3716
San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico
Please do, Rachel.
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Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain
Already said; more color
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Jeff Fiore
Posts: 9225
Brooklyn, New York, US
I'm in More cool location fashion shoots...
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Face Artistx
Posts: 70
Orlando, Florida, US
More shots in nature or just more natural shots in general! I'd love to hear your opinion with an emphasis of what I should get rid of
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Mary Zdo wrote:
I was going to say "more color!" but then I saw that everyone else already said that...but I'll still go with that. Maybe some shots with emphasis on movement similar to your avatar pic but with more color, maybe in the form of crazy stylistic makeup? Sounds like fun, thanks for the suggestion!
Good:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130303/13/5133ba7b1bcb6_m.jpg]()
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130221/01/5125ec44919c5_m.jpg]()
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130224/19/512adf4ea6df8_m.jpg]()
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Just Aly wrote:
more color. Good:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130309/08/513b5fe4e8f7a_m.jpg]()
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130307/09/5138c925e0084_m.jpg]()
Terrible crop and your facial
Expression!
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121115/14/50a572a1062b1_m.jpg]()
Really? Very unflattering expression
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
ShotbyRon wrote:
I hate to sound like I'm copying everyone, but I agree with you need more color! Ok thanks!
Good: ![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130224/18/512ad39747ed5_m.jpg]()
Not that good though, id play w better lighting/ practice capturing models in a better moment
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/14/50a6b975875df_m.jpg]()
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/14/50a6b99139672_m.jpg]()
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Foto Priganica wrote:
Hola ... I'd say you should try some fashion with male models for a change...B&W! You're so right!
I want to work w male models, just gotta find em lol
Good:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111207/04/4edf5bb936e5b_m.jpg]()
Watch your crop though
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110429/02/4dba8a89b9d92_m.jpg]()
What? This is creepy !
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130227/05/512e03c9bfd4e_m.jpg]()
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Philip R
Posts: 698
Agoura Hills, California, US
Oh, you're still going. Me, me me!
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
TampaFoto wrote:
I would like to know please. I would like to see you do something with water or Milk. What do you mean?
Good:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101025/10/4cc5ba015db4e_m.jpg]()
Bad:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101115/16/4ce1d5982f996_m.jpg]()
Ugly:![https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121213/09/50ca0ab59aee6_m.jpg]()
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
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And some close ups of that beautiful face.
