Forums > Digital Art and Retouching > DAR Critiques > beginner retouch critique please

Digital Artist

umutyildiz0

Posts: 70

Ankara, Ankara, Turkey

Mar 23 13 07:57 am Link

Retoucher

Retouch007

Posts: 403

East Newark, New Jersey, US

Very nice, great color. I would watch the hair edges and probably not add freckles but if I did it would be a lot less. Keep it up : )

Mar 24 13 09:42 pm Link

Digital Artist

umutyildiz0

Posts: 70

Ankara, Ankara, Turkey

R G wrote:
Very nice, great color. I would watch the hair edges and probably not add freckles but if I did it would be a lot less. Keep it up : )

thanks!

Mar 27 13 11:03 am Link

Retoucher

pixel dimension ilusion

Posts: 1548

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

for beginners is ok but you have the clean up more and try to keep
the same colour , is like you change the color to much it look
like more retro look, is ok but some client dont like that keep it simple
when you apply effect like that is like you hide behind the effect
try to d&b techniek
here some videos
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bNB9Mepi1VI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6uDnymxwa2o

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrFA07Nodyg if you have sony vegas you can slow the movie and also if you have htlm 5 installed;
but you did good just practice a lot good luck

Mar 29 13 04:35 am Link

Retoucher

Lia1989

Posts: 51

Gdańsk, Pomorskie, Poland

I also dislike these "freckles", it's looks dirty and messy, like you did worsen her face structure even more. Learning DB sounds like a good idea. In general, it doesn't look like you did much to this photo.

Mar 29 13 07:24 am Link

Digital Artist

umutyildiz0

Posts: 70

Ankara, Ankara, Turkey

pixel dimension ilusion wrote:
for beginners is ok but you have the clean up more and try to keep
the same colour , is like you change the color to much it look
like more retro look, is ok but some client dont like that keep it simple
when you apply effect like that is like you hide behind the effect
try to d&b techniek
here some videos
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bNB9Mepi1VI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6uDnymxwa2o

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IrFA07Nodyg if you have sony vegas you can slow the movie and also if you have htlm 5 installed;
but you did good just practice a lot good luck

thanks, watching now

Mar 30 13 02:09 am Link