Forums > Critique > listing and a bit of critique - men's editorial

Photographer

Adam W Photography

Posts: 1722

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

open to photographers mostly , models too.

listing men's editorial images & stories.

also offering critiques , from my pov

post an image or point to your port.

Mar 25 13 06:12 pm Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Hi...would like to hear your comment . Thanks in advance
Cheers

Mar 25 13 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Adam W Photography

Posts: 1722

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Jhomel wrote:
Hi...would like to hear your comment . Thanks in advance
Cheers

right now your port is devoid of much in the way of editorial. having said that,
you are doing great in the image below, in terms of body posture, neck, etc. the one thing that holds this image back from being edi is that you are looking at the camera. position of your head is fine, but I'd like to see your eyes glancing away.

I think that would take the image from portrait to more of an underwear story (or a start to one).

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/16/514262a60dbc0_m.jpg

Mar 25 13 06:22 pm Link

Photographer

Adam W Photography

Posts: 1722

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

anyone else?

Mar 26 13 08:07 pm Link

Photographer

juliarabkin

Posts: 570

Rochester, New York, US

i have a few

Mar 27 13 01:15 pm Link

Model

Apostolos

Posts: 18

London, England, United Kingdom

open to critique / feedback! have a look at my portfolio and let me know smile

Mar 27 13 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

Adam W Photography

Posts: 1722

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

juliarabkin wrote:
i have a few

absolutely love everything about this shot. it has movement and interest and I want to buy the sunglasses. a perfect page.

I listed it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080722/04/48859439ccfe8_m.jpg

Mar 28 13 01:03 pm Link

Photographer

Adam W Photography

Posts: 1722

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Apostolos G wrote:
open to critique / feedback! have a look at my portfolio and let me know smile

from an editorial perspective, this image does it for me in many ways, including the styling and the texture of the coat as well as your moustache and your eyes draw in the viewer.

I actually wish it was composed slightly different but that's neither here nor there.

I listed this shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/21/5142a7d761351_m.jpg

Mar 28 13 01:07 pm Link

Photographer

Ali Choudhry Photo

Posts: 176

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Points to port.

Mar 28 13 05:53 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2395

Los Angeles, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130307/22/51398a76e13fb.jpg



More of a self portrait, really, but what the heck! smile

Mar 29 13 10:01 am Link