Forums > Critique > More new stuff, need help picking 18+

Mar 26 13 04:33 pm Link

Photographer

A N D E R S O N

Posts: 2553

Fountain Valley, California, US

My faves are E from shoot 1, also A & B from shoot 3.

Mar 26 13 04:39 pm Link

Model

E e v a

Posts: 1724

Nashville, Tennessee, US

1. E
2. A
3. B or C both rock
4. Either are good.

Mar 26 13 04:41 pm Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5040

Petaluma, California, US

1 - C & E
2 - none
3 - A & B
4 - B

Mar 26 13 05:10 pm Link

Photographer

SPV Photo

Posts: 802

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I really like A from Shoot 3.

I don't really care for any of the others in the context of your existing port.

Mar 26 13 07:35 pm Link

Photographer

WCR3

Posts: 1240

Houston, Texas, US

Shoot 1: B. Nice pose, and the breasts are relaxed, not pendulous.

Shoot 2: A. You rock a 'stache.

Shoot 3: C. Best colors and the "bubbles" don't get in the way.

Shoot 4: A. Love the facial expression and the hand bra used for support, not cover.

Mar 26 13 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5210

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

Shoot 4 - B

Mar 26 13 07:59 pm Link

Model

Miroslava Svoboda

Posts: 555

Seattle, Washington, US

Really like 1B and 3B and kind of like 4B

Mar 26 13 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

L2Photography net

Posts: 2546

University City, Missouri, US

I love 1a love your look and the photo
L2

Mar 26 13 08:08 pm Link

Photographer

4 R D

Posts: 1080

Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico

1: A, pretty.

2: C, striking and very well done.

3: A, lovely image.

4: B, very sexy.

Mar 26 13 08:14 pm Link

Photographer

Barely StL

Posts: 1162

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

1 - C and E
2 - A
3 - A. (second choice would be C)
4 - A

Not sure any of them are equal to the average photo in your port, but I like shoots 3 and 4 best..

Mar 26 13 08:16 pm Link

Photographer

Alyssa June Photog

Posts: 9

Colorado Springs, Colorado, US

1- a & c
2- a
3- a
4- b

Mar 26 13 09:46 pm Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21718

Orlando, Florida, US

Do you even own any clothes  .  .  .  wink  Shoot 2, B  .  .  .  and shoot 4, B, both caught my eye  .  .  .  the first because it's different, and the second because it's bold and full of attitude  .  .  .  so, when's that trip to Florida happening  .  .  .

SOS

Mar 26 13 10:30 pm Link

Photographer

Rik Williams

Posts: 3615

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'm being really picky here, but A + C from shoot 3 are the only ones worthy of your portfolio imho Nicole

Mar 27 13 02:15 am Link

Photographer

Eros Fine Art Photo

Posts: 2611

Torrance, California, US

Shoot 1 - I like all but the last one.  I also think your skin on the first two has been a little overly smoothed.  I doubt that was necessary. 

Shoot 2 - I love B.  The others aren't bad at all, but B is the most compelling for me.

Shoot 3 - Love all of them, but A is my favorite of the bunch. 

Shoot 4 - Meh.  I like A, because it's not as "glam" as B, but the truth is you're a far better model than what those two images show.  In my opinion, they're a step down from the rest of the work in your portfolio.

But DAMN you're making me want to shoot with you more and more.  You really are amazing.

Mar 27 13 03:20 am Link

Photographer

sybarite photography

Posts: 140

Zwolle, Overijssel, Netherlands

3 A, and perhaps B are great photo's... the others just don't cut it for me... but that is my honest oppion.

For instance the first serie I would like some more emotion, some saidness... that with some stronger light setup (more dark shadows) would have made the serie... again, just my humble oppion...  as you are beautifull.

Mar 27 13 06:29 am Link

Photographer

Sven Lori

Posts: 278

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

My honest feedback:

I like all of shoot 3 - very creative; however, shoot 4 does not contain your best. From the others I like 1 B (nice composition) and 2 A (very original idea).

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